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The art and doodles of a sour apple

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The art and doodles of a sour apple Mar. 25th, 2012 @ 11:35 AM Reply

So here's my newbish art thread. Critiques and reviews are most welcome!

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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple Mar. 26th, 2012 @ 01:03 AM Reply

Headaches are terrible...

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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple Mar. 26th, 2012 @ 01:15 AM Reply

Cute! Nice work, really clean! I approve :D

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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple Mar. 26th, 2012 @ 02:10 AM Reply

At 3/25/12 11:35 AM, Sour91Apple wrote: So here's my newbish art thread. Critiques and reviews are most welcome!

Not bad! Nice charming style here, good simplification.

To critique your elephant peice:
The anatomy of your characters could use a little more resolve- indicate what is chest and what is shoulder, right now they are kind of blending.
The biggest issue I see is that the feet are cropped off at the ankle. It seems like you're doing a vignette, but for vignettes the crop-shape should be carefully designed and help the illustration. It might work better as a whole if you decide to either crop in closer or farther out. To be REEALLY anal, the elephant's trunk against the tea pot should be pressed up against the handle, to seem like he's actually lifting it.

Keep drawing! :D

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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple Mar. 26th, 2012 @ 01:24 PM Reply

Many thanks ReNaeNae :D

At 3/26/12 02:10 AM, LordDF wrote:

Not bad! Nice charming style here, good simplification.

To critique your elephant peice:
The anatomy of your characters could use a little more resolve- indicate what is chest and what is shoulder, right now they are kind of blending.
The biggest issue I see is that the feet are cropped off at the ankle. It seems like you're doing a vignette, but for vignettes the crop-shape should be carefully designed and help the illustration. It might work better as a whole if you decide to either crop in closer or farther out. To be REEALLY anal, the elephant's trunk against the tea pot should be pressed up against the handle, to seem like he's actually lifting it.

Keep drawing! :D

Thanks a bunch for the feedback! And please be as 'anal' as you want, I need all the tips and feedback I can get :D

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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple Mar. 27th, 2012 @ 05:25 PM Reply

I love the first picture it's so fancy!

Very nice job and I love the detail in it.


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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple Mar. 28th, 2012 @ 07:02 PM Reply

At 3/27/12 05:25 PM, iceimp wrote: I love the first picture it's so fancy!

Very nice job and I love the detail in it.

Thanks! :)

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A quick something:

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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple Mar. 28th, 2012 @ 07:09 PM Reply

At 3/28/12 07:02 PM, Sour91Apple wrote:
At 3/27/12 05:25 PM, iceimp wrote: I love the first picture it's so fancy!

Very nice job and I love the detail in it.
Thanks! :)

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BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA ;D This made me laugh xD

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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple May. 5th, 2012 @ 06:28 AM Reply

I'm drowning in schoolwork and stuff... anyway I had some free time yesterday and was experimenting with vectors and pen tool. Here's the result:

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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple Oct. 30th, 2012 @ 11:50 AM Reply

New stuff.. I'd really like to know what you think about this one because something seems wrong to me but I can't tell what D:

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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple Oct. 30th, 2012 @ 11:52 AM Reply

Another one

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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple Oct. 30th, 2012 @ 01:09 PM Reply

At 10/30/12 11:50 AM, Sour91Apple wrote: New stuff.. I'd really like to know what you think about this one because something seems wrong to me but I can't tell what D:

Holy Hannah! Someone's improved!! Really cute stuff!

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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple Nov. 10th, 2012 @ 01:10 PM Reply

At 10/30/12 01:09 PM, ReNaeNae wrote:
At 10/30/12 11:50 AM, Sour91Apple wrote: New stuff.. I'd really like to know what you think about this one because something seems wrong to me but I can't tell what D:
Holy Hannah! Someone's improved!! Really cute stuff!

Thank you :) I'm trying my best though I still have a long way to go.

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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple Nov. 10th, 2012 @ 01:12 PM Reply

I'm drawing a scene from Brave. Here's the sketch... So, I was wondering, do you guys draw the background first or do you leave it to the end?
Also, anyone's got any tips about drawing curly hair?

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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple Jun. 12th, 2013 @ 05:47 AM Reply

It's been a while.
A sketchbook doodle. I'm in love with doodles :3

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Response to The art and doodles of a sour apple Jun. 12th, 2013 @ 05:49 AM Reply

Also, Angry Birds/The Raven fanart.
I'm so bad at making/drawing backgrounds I always end up using a gradient and some texture :(

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