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AyejayRootay
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Critique me! I'll Critique you! 2012-03-25 00:57:54 Reply

Not sure if this is worthy of its own thread but I just wanted to post, I'm new here. I Just started drawing on my Tablet (using Photoshop) and I'd like to know what you guys think, if anything. Tips and any comments are welcome, I'll do my best to give my opinion on yours if you post em'

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Response to Critique me! I'll Critique you! 2012-03-25 01:05:27 Reply

At 3/25/12 12:57 AM, AyejayRootay wrote: Not sure if this is worthy of its own thread but I just wanted to post, I'm new here. I Just started drawing on my Tablet (using Photoshop) and I'd like to know what you guys think, if anything. Tips and any comments are welcome, I'll do my best to give my opinion on yours if you post em'

It's interesting stuff.

Not much to change for what it is, but I would modify the color of the background color to make the beige of the skin stand out more. I would have made the mouth evenlarger, and probably made the gaping, open part of the mouth go further than the boundary of his body to add emphasis to his expression...

Nevertheless, it's cool ^^

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Response to Critique me! I'll Critique you! 2012-03-25 02:35:20 Reply

Well you have coloring down, but it would have been nice to have a background or/and a look at what he is running from. Also, a few more details couldn't hurt, though too many could.

this is a link to my art page My art page , and this is something i drew. If you could comment on it, that'd be great!

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Response to Critique me! I'll Critique you! 2012-03-25 06:14:49 Reply

Coloring looks sloppy man, otherwise its fine.


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