Wanna know your opinion!

[LiorAboudy]

Alice Madness Returns Fan Art by me.
I want to hear your opinion, comment and rate! :)
please just be soft. i'm new around new grounds, and if i had a mistake,
and posted this message in a wrong place,
i'm sorry in advance,
Lior.

[ZJ]

At 1 hour ago, LiorAboudy wrote: Alice Madness Returns Fan Art by me.
I want to hear your opinion, comment and rate! :)
please just be soft. i'm new around new grounds, and if i had a mistake,
and posted this message in a wrong place,
i'm sorry in advance,
Lior.

I like it! It would be cool if you could show some shadows on the drawing, but for the most part, this looks really good!

[hochpoch]

the clothing is a little awkward, but it is good.

[M-Maher]

It needs a background me lad something that references the creepy vibe of the game.

[LiorAboudy]

Thanks guys i was never supported like in here! i guess i would upload another one ive done,
and of course, about that shadow, i can tell that the main reason i didn't yet add a shadow is that im afraid ill mess it up, since its a pencil.. ill upload my second drawing! i love the way people actually say good things hahah :)

[Larwick]

It's certainly creepy.

It's a shame you've given yourself so little space to work with, but I guess that's a good practice in detailing. You need to use some darker pencils and give the body some definition so there's more contrast - at the moment it's a bit flat and the noise on the body is confusing. Shade the hair as a 3D object, it has no form nor lightsource atm. And then there's a lack of shadows on the body in general - for example the brain should be shadowed by the scalp. Also remember to keep your pencils sharp.

Keep it up.

[LiorAboudy]

At 10 minutes ago, Larwick wrote: It's certainly creepy.

It's a shame you've given yourself so little space to work with, but I guess that's a good practice in detailing. You need to use some darker pencils and give the body some definition so there's more contrast - at the moment it's a bit flat and the noise on the body is confusing. Shade the hair as a 3D object, it has no form nor lightsource atm. And then there's a lack of shadows on the body in general - for example the brain should be shadowed by the scalp. Also remember to keep your pencils sharp.

Keep it up.

Thats what ive been waiting for!
for that certain one i used regular pencils and they were sharp all along this drawing.
i now notice my problems with the body, and also i wanted to say that if u look good at the left and right of the brain you can notice a little shadowy place i made, i guess that its also not enough. Thanks!

[Larwick]

At 16 minutes ago, LiorAboudy wrote: i now notice my problems with the body, and also i wanted to say that if u look good at the left and right of the brain you can notice a little shadowy place i made, i guess that its also not enough. Thanks!

I feel like being so subtle with shading is a sign that you're afraid to commit to it. That's perfectly fine, and I think everyone goes through it with traditional work. Aim to break through that barrier though - it might help you to sketch out a lot of quick still life studies involving lighting. That way you can be really harsh with it, without worrying about ruining a serious work in progress.

Good luck.

[LiorAboudy]

At 2 hours ago, Larwick wrote:

At 16 minutes ago, LiorAboudy wrote: i now notice my problems with the body, and also i wanted to say that if u look good at the left and right of the brain you can notice a little shadowy place i made, i guess that its also not enough. Thanks!

I feel like being so subtle with shading is a sign that you're afraid to commit to it. That's perfectly fine, and I think everyone goes through it with traditional work. Aim to break through that barrier though - it might help you to sketch out a lot of quick still life studies involving lighting. That way you can be really harsh with it, without worrying about ruining a serious work in progress.

Good luck.

Thanks very much. i think of studying art.. i have to admit i never thought about it and that 'masterpiece' you see above is of a guy with no special and professional tricks.. your post helped me a lot.

[Larwick]

At 20 minutes ago, LiorAboudy wrote: your post helped me a lot.

My pleasure.