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Hush Mar. 15th, 2012 @ 08:32 AM Reply

me and two other friends have been working on this, i'm the "artist" and i help story write too. i'll improve as i go natrually and with comment here (i hope).

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Response to Hush Mar. 15th, 2012 @ 08:34 AM Reply

done some research, so there's a little bit of a jump between first and second page.

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Response to Hush Apr. 4th, 2012 @ 05:55 PM Reply

At 4/4/12 05:49 PM, mega-supreme wrote: page 3

id love to see some shades of grey in there, really make the comic pop

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Response to Hush Apr. 4th, 2012 @ 09:17 PM Reply

It's alright, though I don't quite follow what's going on and I'd suggest maybe more of an introductory take on the story line rather than just tossing the reader into it.

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Response to Hush Apr. 5th, 2012 @ 08:20 AM Reply

explanations will come as the story continues, also i'll get some grey in there too.

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Response to Hush Apr. 5th, 2012 @ 02:28 PM Reply

At 3/15/12 08:32 AM, mega-supreme wrote: me and two other friends have been working on this, i'm the "artist" and i help story write too. i'll improve as i go natrually and with comment here (i hope).

This was really good the story looks ok, the drawing really jump out at you. more of that more of thinking outside of the box.

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Response to Hush Apr. 5th, 2012 @ 09:41 PM Reply

The lettering is kinda throwing me off a little. It's doesn't seem to fit really well with the art. And all those ellipsis are distracting O_O
They usually only consist of three dots. . . Ya know?
The artwork is cool though. And grey tones are a great suggestion to make it pop; it'll work great in the background areas too and such. The prospects of this comic seem pretty good! Keep at it!