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It's alright, though I don't quite follow what's going on and I'd suggest maybe more of an introductory take on the story line rather than just tossing the reader into it.
At 3/15/12 08:32 AM, mega-supreme wrote: me and two other friends have been working on this, i'm the "artist" and i help story write too. i'll improve as i go natrually and with comment here (i hope).
This was really good the story looks ok, the drawing really jump out at you. more of that more of thinking outside of the box.
The lettering is kinda throwing me off a little. It's doesn't seem to fit really well with the art. And all those ellipsis are distracting O_O
They usually only consist of three dots. . . Ya know?
The artwork is cool though. And grey tones are a great suggestion to make it pop; it'll work great in the background areas too and such. The prospects of this comic seem pretty good! Keep at it!