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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Mar. 22nd, 2012 @ 10:42 AM Reply

At 3 hours ago, LegolaSS wrote:
At 3 hours ago, CloudEater wrote: Personally I think this would be 5.2 times better without the poorly drawn tits.. >:I
as in if they were drawn better? or as in if they are not part of the picture... anyway, I'm still working on it, so any comments and crit are welcome...

Like without them there at all.. (or not as big) *
As I scroll down it's like, wow a very well painted classy lad-.. oh, she's just a whore, how disappointing.
But if you did draw them better and more realistic then it'd probably be acceptable.

This is my analysis of your drawing. Red is where I see her shape to be.
At the moment they seem very lopsided and too far to her left. Red line points down chest, though I seem to have drawn that slightly too far to her right and ms paint doesn't have layers and so erasing is.. yeah. Green is boobs, she is obviously facing slightly off to the right of screen and her left shoulder seems slightly lifted; hence her left mammary should appear smaller and not as low and they need to seem a lot more parallel and even and all that, grey dots. The right one does not seem to have the right shape. You must get the shading correct so they seem good and proper.

* They're too big as well and really take the focus away from the really great work you've done so far on her face, hand, and hair.
So yeah, that's some of my thoughts spewed out into unstructured sentences for your reading pleasure. Feel free to acknowledge or disregard as much of it as you wish.

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Mar. 22nd, 2012 @ 02:38 PM Reply

At 3 hours ago, CloudEater wrote: At the moment they seem very lopsided and too far to her left.
her left shoulder seems slightly lifted
The right one does not seem to have the right shape.
They're too big as well
add "radical"

hopefully fixed these points... will tweak her freaky ear at some point...

Sketchy15

You must get the shading correct so they seem good and proper.

will try :D

i feel like im sort of taking over this thread with WIP and Repairs... let see some more :D


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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Mar. 24th, 2012 @ 12:46 PM Reply

im sick of looking at this now... her sleeve looks too thin and her chest and hand are not as well colored i think but i have had enough of it... now lets check the rules...

attached picture is 500x500 pix... used the face and added in the words (thanks for that idea) and i put effort into it...

yay... *sleeps*

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Mar. 25th, 2012 @ 12:24 AM Reply

At 3/24/12 12:46 PM, LegolaSS wrote: yay... *sleeps*

Oh my goodness! So much better than before. That my friend, was advice taken well. Looks great.

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Mar. 25th, 2012 @ 01:19 AM Reply

At 3/21/12 08:24 PM, Ashman wrote: Rawr

I like how it looks and I'll accept it, but as a warning, it's not a terribly creative interpretation of the emoticon. Be careful, Floppidix might laser his hot steamy diode all over your picture if you don't liven it up.

At 3/24/12 12:46 PM, LegolaSS wrote: yay... *sleeps*

Watching you guys (Cloudy, Dweeby, Aigis) come together to help guide and critique this painting was awesome in my opinion! This is really great, Leggy. If you don't, it's okay, but do you have a higher quality copy of this?

PSA: Make your pieces creative! Lego's is a shining example of this. You do not want things like this mediocre dong I painted (nsfw) to appear on your paintings!

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Mar. 25th, 2012 @ 04:41 AM Reply

At 3/25/12 01:19 AM, Spaghetti14 wrote: ...but do you have a higher quality copy of this?

Like this?


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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Mar. 25th, 2012 @ 06:04 PM Reply

Calling

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Mar. 25th, 2012 @ 06:30 PM Reply

At 3/25/12 06:04 PM, reicrime wrote: Calling

We're sorry...

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Mar. 27th, 2012 @ 03:39 AM Reply

At 3/25/12 04:41 AM, LegolaSS wrote: Like this?

Poifect!

At 3/25/12 06:30 PM, ReNaeNae wrote:
At 3/25/12 06:04 PM, reicrime wrote: Calling
We're sorry...

Yup, 'fraid so!

Due to unforeseen circumstance, MajesticBob unfortunately has left the competition, leaving face #12 open!

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Mar. 27th, 2012 @ 03:40 AM Reply

At 3/27/12 03:39 AM, Spaghetti14 wrote:
At 3/25/12 04:41 AM, LegolaSS wrote: Like this?
Poifect!
At 3/25/12 06:30 PM, ReNaeNae wrote:
At 3/25/12 06:04 PM, reicrime wrote: Calling
We're sorry...
Yup, 'fraid so!

Due to unforeseen circumstance, MajesticBob unfortunately has left the competition, leaving face #12 open!

Dibs on 12 please.


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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Mar. 27th, 2012 @ 06:52 PM Reply

At 3/27/12 03:40 AM, ImpendingRiot wrote: Dibs on 12 please.

damn!

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Mar. 30th, 2012 @ 01:45 PM Reply

WIP

Finally got some time to start working on my piece. Feedback is appreciated.

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Mar. 30th, 2012 @ 01:51 PM Reply

I'm still working on mine, just to reassure everyone.
I have been working on concepts and trying to come up with something better than my current entry.


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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Mar. 30th, 2012 @ 03:06 PM Reply

At 3/30/12 03:02 PM, Larkatosa wrote: Okay, this is what I've got.

ooh, Hi Trixy!


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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 1st, 2012 @ 07:13 AM Reply

Sorry if it's been a while, but I finally got around to putting the finishing touches on this character.

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 1st, 2012 @ 09:17 AM Reply

At 4/1/12 07:13 AM, OutcastLabs wrote: Sorry if it's been a while, but I finally got around to putting the finishing touches on this character.

I'm not too sure about the shadow, it kinda makes the face quite flat. Where you going for that or was it meant to be sphere shaped?


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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 1st, 2012 @ 01:13 PM Reply

At 4/1/12 07:13 AM, OutcastLabs wrote: Sorry if it's been a while, but I finally got around to putting the finishing touches on this character.

The shading is inconsistent with the shadow.

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 2nd, 2012 @ 10:46 PM Reply

I think it's pretty much finished.

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 11th, 2012 @ 01:49 PM Reply

I'd like to open up my spot, #40, if anyone else wants it. I've got finals coming up and I still haven't had any ideas for this that I like.

If no one takes it I'll try to churn something out anyway, but I figure there seemed to be enough demand before that someone else should get a chance to do it right.


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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 12th, 2012 @ 01:43 PM Reply

Fine, I'll take 20 too.
You people better work on this collab :0


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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 12th, 2012 @ 02:19 PM Reply

At 4/12/12 01:43 PM, test-object wrote: Fine, I'll take 20 too.
You people better work on this collab :0

I'll still be getting mine done just got a few more important things going on in "my real life" at the moment.


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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 12th, 2012 @ 03:05 PM Reply

At 4/12/12 02:19 PM, Decky wrote:
At 4/12/12 01:43 PM, test-object wrote: Fine, I'll take 20 too.
You people better work on this collab :0
I'll still be getting mine done just got a few more important things going on in "my real life" at the moment.

real life is overrated, dump everyone you know.


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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 12th, 2012 @ 03:33 PM Reply

I'll take 34!

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 12th, 2012 @ 03:36 PM Reply

sorry... ignore that...

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 13th, 2012 @ 05:39 AM Reply

At 4/12/12 03:05 PM, test-object wrote: real life is overrated, dump everyone you know.

Advice taken.


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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 13th, 2012 @ 06:37 AM Reply

whos in charge here!?... get these artists into shape...

you have just over two weeks and I see a lot of gaps!...

also i need to dump real life friends as they take up too much time... il get on that right away.


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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 13th, 2012 @ 06:52 AM Reply

At 4/13/12 06:37 AM, LegolaSS wrote: whos in charge here!?... get these artists into shape...

Looks like it's time for a mass pm eh? (hint hint)


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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 13th, 2012 @ 10:05 AM Reply

After reading the critiques about the shading, I updated the picture just to make it look a bit more realistic.

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 13th, 2012 @ 02:38 PM Reply

Sorry for not posting in here for a while! Anyways, after reading all the posts, I'll post the current list of who is in what spot.

At 4/13/12 10:05 AM, OutcastLabs wrote: After reading the critiques about the shading, I updated the picture just to make it look a bit more realistic.

I'm sorry, but I just don't think you have enough experience. Keep practicing!

Numbers 7 and 40 are open!

IMPORTANT: If I do not have an update within the next week, your spot will be relinquished. I will be sending out PMs shortly. The deadline for an update is 11:59PM EST Friday April 20th. This goes for everyone, regardless of whether or not you've previously sent in an update.

Done - 1 - test-object
2 - Kashi
3 - monsterparty
4 - JackDGreatest
Done - 5 - ZaneZansorrow
Done - 6 - DweebyHawkeyes
7 -
8 - Decky
Done - 9 - Flowers10
Done - 10 - Sockembop
11 - Spaghetti14
12 - ImpendingRiot
13 - Lucky
Done - 14 - thekiwi
15 - CloudEater
16 - ZombieMonkey
17 - QQBistro
18 - Larkatosa
19 - BlackMist75
20 - test-object
Done - 21 - Aigis
22 - DEADxLORD
23 - TheDragonBoy
24 - ReNaeNae
Done - 25 - Ashman
26 - MihaP
27 - Hoboweasel
28 - Knocturne
29 - Asperchu
30 - Kinsei01
Done - 31 - creepyboy
Done - 32 - LegolaSS
Done - 33 - Lintire
Done - 34 - J-qb
Done - 35 - jagondudo
36 - MasterMerol
37 - Luwano
Done - 38 - Captain Carrion
39 - M-Vero
40 -

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Response to The Emoticon Collab! Apr. 13th, 2012 @ 02:40 PM Reply

At 4/13/12 02:38 PM, Spags wrote: IMPORTANT: If I do not have an update within the next week, your spot will be relinquished. I will be sending out PMs shortly. The deadline for an update is 11:59PM EST Friday April 20th. This goes for everyone, regardless of whether or not you've previously sent in an update.

That's worded a little awkwardly. If you've posted a significant WIP like Nae or something, then I'm not gonna give your spot up, but I still do want a new update. If you haven't sent in any updates, then yes, your spot will be relinquished. Sorry for any confusion~