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Some people mentioned that i should consider making my picture easier on the eyes so here's this.
Let me know if your pupil's crave anymore alterations.

At 23 minutes ago, Asperchu wrote: Better or worse?

Worse. The cool colour contrast was doing the picture good.

At 8 hours ago, thekiwi wrote: Version 2.0 (final version)
I have cleaned the lines, like a janitor..an drawing janitor.

Alright, I'll accept this, although I have to say, I did like the string of tiny broken hearts. Now that this is accepted, you're allowed to fiddle with it further if you so desire, but I'm content with where it's at if you are! Good job.

At 6 hours ago, lgnxhll wrote: heres mine

I appreciate the effort, and it's better than before, but I'm afraid I'm gonna have to say no and relinquish your spot, it's just not up to standard. Thanks for participating though!

At 3 hours ago, Captain-Carrion wrote: Some people mentioned that i should consider making my picture easier on the eyes so here's this.
Let me know if your pupil's crave anymore alterations.

Dood, this is already so much cooler. PERSONALLY, I liked it when you had the rainbow-y zipper, I thought it looked hella cool, but I like it as it is now too, already a big improvement.

At 1 hour ago, Asperchu wrote: ok so update

I think what he meant is that the contrast was better when your background wasn't the same colour as the face. Good progress so far, but you've got a lot to add/clean up! Keep going :D

Okay, new progress list!

Open spots: 12, 27, 34
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Done - 1 - test-object
2 - Kashi
3 - monsterparty
4 - JackDGreatest
5 - ZaneZansorrow
6 - DweebyHawkeyes
7 - OutcastLabs
8 - Decky
Done - 9 - Flowers10
Done - 10 - Sockembop
11 - Spaghetti14
12 -
13 - Lucky
Done - 14 - thekiwi
15 - CloudEater
16 - ZombieMonkey
17 - QQBistro
18 - PersonUnknown
19 - BlackMist75
20 - Bilalz
Done - 21 - Aigis
22 - DEADxLORD
23 - TheDragonBoy
24 - ReNaeNae
25 - Ashman
26 - MihaP
27 -
28 - Knocturne
29 - Asperchu
30 - Kinsei01
31 - creepyboy
32 - LegolaSS
Done - 33 - Lintire
34 -
35 - jagondudo
36 - MasterMerol
37 - Luwano
Done - 38 - Captain Carrion
39 - StevRayBro
40 - lovingthedark

thirtyfour

At 1 day ago, J-qb wrote: thirtyfour

bam

At 3 hours ago, J-qb wrote:

At 1 day ago, J-qb wrote: thirtyfour

bam

I think it's well done, colours are nice, although generally, I was hoping for more innovative ideas concerning the faces. I'mma accept it, but perhaps think about revamping and adding more of a personal flair to it. Also, Lintire says he's gonna put dicks on it if you don't make it more interesting. His exact words were"make your entries a fucking interesting interpretation or there will be a big floppy dick drawn on them when submitted into the collab".

I cannot speak for the validity or integrity of these statements, as the flash is in his hands, and although I disagree, he can pretty much do whatever he wants. So as a PSA: MAKE YOUR PIECES CREATIVE/VISUALLY INTERESTING, ELSE RUN THE RISK OF HAVING A FLOPPY PENIS DRAWN ON TOP OF IT. Again, I don't know how I feel about that either, so I apologise.

At 1 day ago, Decky wrote: Sorry that I kinda claimed a piece then disappearing for a little while. I'm still creating the piece and will have something to show y'all in the next couple of days. I guess looking at the deadline you lot probably didn't give it a second thought, just thought I'd let ya know.

'Preciate the update, thx.

At 1 day ago, thekiwi wrote: AW YEAH ! because I have much time left before the timeline I will try to make even better !

That's some good stuff right there. Look forward to seeing v2!

Only spots left are 12 and 27, everybody.

At 4 hours ago, Spaghetti14 wrote: ...perhaps think about revamping and adding more of a personal flair to it.

Nope, sry. This is my entry, take it or leave it.

Also, Lintire says he's gonna put dicks on it if you don't make it more interesting.

I'm okay with that.

At 2 hours ago, thekiwi wrote: That looks great but I made my drawing how it is. I did think about how to draw this and a monochrome and rough (pixel like) drawing style was how I wanted it.

Just so you know-
Monochrome: being or made in the tones of a single color

Also I agree with Lucky- the cyan and red are kind of retina-scarring and have no real relationship to each other. Why did you choose them?

I disagree with lucky and jess, I think the colors look good; maybe tone of em done a bit, but still keep em bright. I also much prefer the pixelated look to lucky's shoddy trace.

At 19 hours ago, MajesticBob wrote: I'm gonna attempt 12

'Tis a strange, but interesting idea - is the guy's body sad that it's overweight? Anyway, I think you should get rid of the butt-chin line, the nose/shirt folds between his pecs, and revise the crotch line, it kind of looks like the guy wet himself. Also, the shirt looks more pissed off than sad, which is the emoticon you chose. You have made the crotch of a trim and muscular man and you need to change the shape to fit a large, rotund man. Revise! Anyways, if you spend more time on this and keep working on it, it'll make it in.

At 5 hours ago, DweebyHawkeyes wrote: Aight! Six is all done. You may complain and I might revise since the deadline is so roomy.

Excellent! It turned out much better in the long run, I like it heaps. Totes approved.

At 12 hours ago, Lucky wrote: may i suggest running it trough illustrator to smooth the lines and choosing duller colors

At 3 hours ago, lovingthedark wrote: Also I agree with Lucky- the cyan and red are kind of retina-scarring and have no real relationship to each other. Why did you choose them?

It's nice of you two to offer input, but apparently he likes it like this, so it's no biggie. Thanks for the feedback though, it gets stressful to be the only source of it or whatever. Woooo...

At 39 minutes ago, J-qb wrote: I disagree with lucky and jess, I think the colors look good; maybe tone of em done a bit, but still keep em bright. I also much prefer the pixelated look to lucky's shoddy trace.

Hey now, don't gotta be a dick about it. Lucky was just tryin' to help out and offer input, I think it looks cool.

So anyways, the only open spot left is 27. Any takers???