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At 4/16/12 05:05 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 4/16/12 01:41 PM, ReNaeNae wrote: Jonny, whether they're added to the collab or not, you should do the faces!!!

Okay, so I've taken a photo for all 40 emoticons now.
Question is, if spags wants them, whether to have the photo's just as themselves, or to shop them over the face of the actual collab pieces.

I like this idea, it could be like a bonus feature or something :).

Anyway here is my WIP, I still need to do some more colouring in (like a big kid) and work on the text, just general stuff. Also I'm uploading this from my phone so I don't know how the quality is going to be. If it's really bad then I'll upload it again when I can get to a computer, probably tomorrow.

At 4/16/12 05:45 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Yeah, I'll just shop the faces on as you accept the finished products.

But won't that almost double the size of the flash?
It would be better if you put all the faces on a masked layer and then just unmask them with some button or key.

number 13

Done alittle more still needs some more shading although any advice would be nice :) so here's another WIP. Please don't give up my place Spag :).

Calling it done

At 4/18/12 07:52 AM, ZaneZansorrow wrote: Calling it done

niceeeeeeeee!

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/406b6d202c45b2944bba0ff6 82def7c0

I got a WIP picture, sorry for being so slow :c

At 4/18/12 08:51 PM, BlackMist75 wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/406b6d202c45b2944bba0ff6 82def7c0

I got a WIP picture, sorry for being so slow :c

Whip.
This is going to hopefully be creepy as hell, lmao.

One artistic lecture later...

An un-amused Terminator. He doesn't approve of your existence

At 4/19/12 03:05 AM, Spags wrote:

At 4/17/12 06:16 PM, Decky wrote: Done alittle more still needs some more shading although any advice would be nice :) so here's another WIP. Please don't give up my place Spag :).

I hate to be that guy, but you need to work on this - the linework is kinda boring, the colours are flat, and the background pattern is ugly. Also, I don't really see how it relates to the emoticon. If you don't have something more relevant/ironed out by 11:59PM EST Friday April 20th, I'm afraid I will have to give up your spot.

Right, ok. Well I can understand your comments on the background and the flat colours but you don't see how it relates to the emoticon? it's face is pulling the emoticon face that I picked?! I can add shade (as i stated still needed to be done) and change the background/ work on the drawing in general but if you think that I'm starting again you are sadly mistaken. I just don't get why this doesn't relate?! I understood for my first attempt but this one fits in my opinion.

At 4/19/12 05:48 AM, test-object wrote: It's mainly in the eyes. The cross-eyes throws one of rather a lot. When I first saw it, it looked as if you were going for the slightly mentally challenged one (37).

I did think that the eyes were a little wrong myself, i'll straighten them out when I get home (at college at the moment).

Don't get so offended tho, Spags just wants this collab to be really good :)

I do understand, if I was in his position I'd obviously want the best and I'm aware that my artwork is nothing compared to some of the pieces that have got in so far and maybe I over reacted. I'm just under quite a bit of stress at the current time, I apologise. But I still stick to the fact that I'm not starting it again. I'll try and get as much done as I can by tomorrow and show that it still can be a good piece that is worthy of this collab.

At 4/18/12 07:52 AM, ZaneZansorrow wrote: Calling it done

Holy fucking shit, how the when did you even like how did you even get to this level of artistic goodness?!!?!?

Right then, lets try this again, just had about an hour on the thing, some more problems have arisen and now it needs to be neatened up but I changed the background and got rid of the text which shall be added again. I added some filters to the rabbit and desk to give it a less flat fell. They haven't 100% worked but i'll have a play around with it later and I'm sure I can make it better :) (i like playing with rabbits). Please don't bite my head off for producing this quite yet as I'll post an improved one tomorrow. Please give me some advice for now though. (higher quality)

I'm aware the lines currently look shit, I'm just going to go over the lines again.

At 4/19/12 06:55 AM, Decky wrote: stuff

scratch that, the filters look terrible. I'll try again.

Firstly sorry for the amount of posts.

Improvement...............Behold (better version) just needs a little neatening up now.

Still working on it!

rage (17) wip

At 4/19/12 09:54 AM, Decky wrote: Firstly sorry for the amount of posts.
Improvement...............Behold (better version) just needs a little neatening up now.

Why a rabbit? and why are you trying to make it into a joke? it's an art collab.

It looks like something a design student would do with the very rigid unfree lines and regular shapes and then the flat colours that you've tried to make look better with unsubtle textures. Like it's obvious you were using a drawing software and not using a free moving tool which makes your drawing look very unnatural. Also your colour choices aren't very harmonic.

Also your drawing doesn't seem to properly reflect your emoticon. You've got the face going all like "oh god, what the fuck, what did I just see" ..while to me that emoticon is actually more of a "is this guy serious?" sorta face.

At 4/19/12 03:05 AM, Spags wrote: Open spots are 19, 26, and 40.

May I please take number 26?