At 6/27/12 06:56 AM, Amaranthus wrote:
TOAS told me to start over.
I don't want to sound like an asshole man, but you seriously need to take more time on these. This looks like a bunch of lines you just drew in 5 seconds, I can tell you took no time at all doing this. You need to start with a sketch before you start painting stuff, or else it will look less refined. I'd say start with something simple, reference a picture, anything really, but from "real" life, like a photograph or something. Don't look at the picture as individual segments, but rather pay attention to the form, the shape the object/person has. Try to get more practice drawing, the basics, before you start adding color. Id like to see a proper still life, or portrait, something easy to start off with. Try to get it looking as close to the picture as you can, and then after you've spent a good amount of time on it, say an hour or so, post it, and I guarantee it will look 1000x better. Again, Im not trying to be a dick, Im just trying to help you out, seriously man. I look forward to that sketch dude