a21
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I am (Poem) Feb. 16th, 2012 @ 12:16 AM Reply

I am a bottom feeder
I am on the top
You are the leader

Watch out for peers
You are in the clear
You play a game for leeches

Its beneath me
The tide is shifting
The chatter of teeth
You begin to creep
You're lifting
The floor above you is inching

Craftily you sink
A rock crumbles into sand

You return to your land
The hidden hand
It grabs you intentionally
Have you failed to mention me?
Rescue me from your disastor
I spread my wings in laughter

I stand up
I am flattered
Plaster me into Your hands

I am

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Response to I am (Poem) Feb. 16th, 2012 @ 12:34 AM Reply

At 12 minutes ago, a21 wrote:
Craftily you sink
A rock crumbles into sand

I could imagine hand-gestures through a lot of this, consider it a spoken word piece? and big emphasis on crumbles.

Y'know? Anyways, cool stuff. ^^