How can I improve my idea

[bloo-apple]

I am trying to portray how we hide behind out own walls and that life would be so much better if we viewed things in the 3rd Eye with honor. Here is what I drew so far, what do you think I can do to improve my idea or make the artwork better?

[Aigis]

Well, the angles of the eyeguys' heads make it look like they're just looking around the wall at each other, so it might be a good idea to fix that.

[bloo-apple]

At 2/2/12 01:29 AM, Aigis wrote: Well, the angles of the eyeguys' heads make it look like they're just looking around the wall at each other, so it might be a good idea to fix that.

better?

[XwaynecoltX]

At 2/2/12 01:27 AM, bloo-apple wrote: I am trying to portray how we hide behind out own walls and that life would be so much better if we viewed things in the 3rd Eye with honor. Here is what I drew so far, what do you think I can do to improve my idea or make the artwork better?

I love the focus on the eyes, it really has a nice and artistic feel too it, nice job, keep on with the color and such, its a great piece.

~X~

[nathanielmilburn]

What do the four words on the wall mean? Is there a specific reason for each?

A general rule that I've always try to stick by is to never use straight black or straight white, use some type of off black or off white. Just doesn't mix well.

[Crazystuff]

Very nice. However i do think the eyes should be changed to face forward more. Like having the iris parcialy shown, a side veiw. Love it so far, but maybe change it so more emphasis on the wall, which according to you is the focus of the peice. Try making things less extravagant around the wall and contrast things to make the wall more appealing. The first thing my eye sees when i look at this are the three eyes. the background and the effects are slightly overpowering. However sometimes overpowering can work. It just takes a lot of re-sizing and tweaking.

[mega-supreme]

i don't know much about art, but i like the concept and good luck with it.