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a poem i wrote for my ex girlfriend

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ralos12345
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a poem i wrote for my ex girlfriend 2012-01-28 12:06:44 Reply

she gave me love she gave me hope
now she's gone and im lost
my life went crazy i lost hope and i got hate
i feel happy for the time i had with her and i feel sad for myself
i let her come to close to my heart now i suffer my foolinesh
now she has a new boy not even a month has past
i feel sorry for the boy cuz he will suffer like i did once
yes i love her and yes i hate her
i gave her the world even more
but that was not enought for her
she destroyed the world i gave her
not even a tear came out as she left me
not even a sad face...
blinded by the desire to party and smoke weed
and by the momories of her ex boyfriends
she could never love me for i was too different
and not that its over and im left with a broken heart,broken dreams,a destroyed world and in tears
i feel sad for cuz she never will be loved by someone like me ever again
thats the end i hope you like it its my kinda get over her poem or something like that

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Response to a poem i wrote for my ex girlfriend 2012-02-02 15:47:26 Reply

oh thats sad.. i know how you feel. just know that she doesnt deserve you.

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Response to a poem i wrote for my ex girlfriend 2012-02-02 17:35:03 Reply

Sad. :( There must have been a few good times between you though. Otherwise, why were you together anyway? I know it's hard to remember the good when you're so focused on the bad stuff that hurt you. I hope you're feeling a little better now though.