Advise on some stuff?

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Wined-And-Dined
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Advise on some stuff? Jan. 21st, 2012 @ 07:46 PM Reply

Hey I got 2 pictures I made. Any critiques on them?

http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/wined -and-dined/destructive-essence

http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/wined -and-dined/galamond-the-molten-jester

I'm kinda new here.

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Response to Advise on some stuff? Jan. 21st, 2012 @ 07:49 PM Reply

Did not realize I could do this... :D

Advise on some stuff?

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Response to Advise on some stuff? Jan. 21st, 2012 @ 09:00 PM Reply

Pay more attention to the volume of the objects you are painting.

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Response to Advise on some stuff? Jan. 21st, 2012 @ 09:05 PM Reply

There are areas in these that look good, but it seems like you almost lose interest after your done doing a wicked looking face. So that's what I mean, everything should be at the same level, and everything should have volume, or not have volume... otherwise it ends up looking a little jumbled.
Everyone is guilty of this to some extent. a drawing that is consistent is more impressive than one that has two or three well drawn parts, but overall is inconsistent. The well done parts make the less thought out areas look out of place.