Adrellia Village #39 Wips

[MistyEntertainment]

Animated work-in-progresses of my new project, "Adrellia Village #39" will go here. I would love to hear what you guys think!

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/2bcd 70daa64de33d3a63f49dfa972500

Feedback is also appreciated on episode 38, which I finished a few days ago. Please let me know which parts should be fixed and how I can improve. Thank you for your time.

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  Adrellia Village #38 by MistyEntertainment

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[MistyEntertainment]

Here is version 2: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/4891 165fbcf761de9deab4ab1b70f83b It's basically like the first version I posted, except that I added a scene and polished what I already had.

Please leave feedback! I'd love to hear what you think.

[Sacros]

you have my support good sir, my only suggestion is further insight on color, i belive thats your main obstacle as of now since my aesthetic sense complains on that area, good news is a simple google trip will enhance your work tenfolds

otherwise your animation seems great and if the numbering 38 doesnt lie when suggesting there are other 37 movies behind, well, reason tells me you have quite the experience on this kind of artistic field

also, this is personal opinion but i dont know about the stick characters as they resemble happiness and cynide toons way too much

[MistyEntertainment]

Here is an animation of Rory sneaking from the last episode: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/a7fa 78bc337106776f6389fc126e2448

Please critique it.

[MistyEntertainment]

What does everybody think?

[DillonBrannick]

At 3 days ago, MistyEntertainment wrote: Here is an animation of Rory sneaking from the last episode: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/a7fa 78bc337106776f6389fc126e2448

Please critique it.

Yeah I think its good, there seems to be a little jittery-ness in the legs when the hit the floor and begin to move back, other than that seems decent.

[MistyEntertainment]

At 7 hours ago, DillonBrannick wrote:

At 3 days ago, MistyEntertainment wrote: Here is an animation of Rory sneaking from the last episode: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/a7fa 78bc337106776f6389fc126e2448

Please critique it.

Yeah I think its good, there seems to be a little jittery-ness in the legs when the hit the floor and begin to move back, other than that seems decent.

Thanks, I'll work on that. What does everybody think about version 2 of my introductory scene? One of my main concerns is that when King William reads his poem, the camera focuses on him in one shot. I'm worried this will look too bland and boring.

Also, how can I improve my color?

[Sacros]

At 43 minutes ago, MistyEntertainment wrote: Also, how can I improve my color?

google color theory and color composition

[MistyEntertainment]

At 3 weeks ago, MistyEntertainment wrote: Animated work-in-progresses of my new project, "Adrellia Village #39" will go here. I would love to hear what you guys think!

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/2bcd 70daa64de33d3a63f49dfa972500

Feedback is also appreciated on episode 38, which I finished a few days ago. Please let me know which parts should be fixed and how I can improve. Thank you for your time.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/587515

New version. http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/d132c3a8ea4dece9fa866973 7e56f660
Also, can somebody please tell me why my one-minute-long movie amounts to 2.8 MB? Usually, optimization isn't a problem. I tried compressing the audio but there was only a slight difference in file size.

This morning, I could upload up to 20 MB flash files. Now, I can only upload 10 MB flash files. Anyone experience the same thing?

Thanks a lot for everybody's help!

[MistyEntertainment]

Feedback is appreciated.
also, new animation