At 10/1/12 12:53 PM, bigCman321 wrote:
I'm really proud of this one. Done using charcoal and graphite on paper in two days. It was a project that was due today in class dealing with surrealism. Any critiques or suggestions because I can change a few things before I turn it in on wednesday. I already plan on working more on the planet on the left and I'm not sure what I'm going to do with the beam of light.
I think it's looking really good so far. The only thing I would have to add is to really punch those values. I did a little digital editing, so you could see what I was talking about. And as far as the beam of light goes, I think it would look really good if it took on a lightning bolt type of form. Try using white charcoal to get really crisp whites.