At 4/7/13 05:45 AM, bigCman321 wrote:
Okay, changed a ton of stuff (like I always do with these...) I'm way happier with the face. I'll be redoing other stuff too. I was looking at how Artgerm shades in his pictures and tried to mimic that.
As much as I dig the cityscape, the vertical orientation you were using earlier works quite a bit better. The Major is better composed in the earlier version, and she actually looks placed in the scene. In the newer versions the Major looks like she's posing in front of a matte painting or floating over the water, and, as cool as it is, the city is way too detailed. Between the city and its reflection, there is a whole lot of activity going on in the background, so the Major stops being the focal point.
Plus, I really like the red/green contrast you had going on in the second WIP you posted.