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LordJaric
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Hallowed 2011-12-27 02:28:37 Reply

This is my most recent fanfics, it's on Teen Titans (cartoon), I'm open to all suggestions to improve on my writing, particularly on fight scenes.

Hallowed- A threat to humanity arises through an unknown enemy. The threat becomes personal for the Titans as the enemy uses Starfire to further their goals. For Starfire it becomes more than personal. RobinxStarfire romance, StarfirexRaven friendship Rated: Teen Action/Adventure/Supernatural Main Character: Starfire

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Response to Hallowed 2011-12-27 11:49:40 Reply

Honestly, if you are seriously trying to improve your writing, I'd recommend not writing fanfic. It's important to be able to come up with your own setting (or universe) from which characters, conflict, and plot are derived. The process of creating these elements are fundamental for a writer and cannot be overlooked.

Despite the name, I'm actually good--Deft, and good!

Giving out reviews to anyone who wants them (exception: poems. I'll find you).

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Response to Hallowed 2012-01-09 02:03:55 Reply
At 12/27/11 11:49 AM, DeftAndEvil wrote: Honestly, if you are seriously trying to improve your writing, I'd recommend not writing fanfic. It's important to be able to come up with your own setting (or universe) from which characters, conflict, and plot are derived. The process of creating these elements are fundamental for a writer and cannot be overlooked.

If Lord Jaric is as old as he says he is, then you're probably right. However, I think fanfiction can help with younger writers just as a way of getting them engaged with their own writing.

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