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Lazer Turtle 2011-12-22 00:16:19 Reply

before i finish with the finished product, i thought i would show the sletch and see if anyone spots any mistakes, besides the turtle shell which is way to small and terribly drawn. but other than that, anything else? helb meh, tis wil beh awenzum
and yes some details are lacking, but im asking if there are any proportional things i have screwed up.

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Response to Lazer Turtle 2011-12-22 01:22:58 Reply

The neck and head are too thick compared to the rest of the turtle.

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Response to Lazer Turtle 2011-12-22 05:43:27 Reply
At 12/22/11 01:22 AM, jjjkuk wrote: The neck and head are too thick compared to the rest of the turtle.

^This^

Also what is that thing infront of it? Is it a mirror or something? It's kinda hard to tell you were you'r going wrong because of the quality of the sketch. It gives no idea as to the quality of the final drawing and therefore it's hard to not just say "the quality of the lines is very rough" or "it appears rushed". In future I'd simply upload the finished work or near finished and let people comment on that. You can always edit the drawing from their advice.

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Response to Lazer Turtle 2011-12-22 11:56:48 Reply
At 12/22/11 05:43 AM, Decky wrote:
At 12/22/11 01:22 AM, jjjkuk wrote: The neck and head are too thick compared to the rest of the turtle.
^This^

Also what is that thing infront of it? Is it a mirror or something? It's kinda hard to tell you were you'r going wrong because of the quality of the sketch. It gives no idea as to the quality of the final drawing and therefore it's hard to not just say "the quality of the lines is very rough" or "it appears rushed". In future I'd simply upload the finished work or near finished and let people comment on that. You can always edit the drawing from their advice.

you.....have a point, i was wondering about that lol, if whether or not i should clean it up a bit. thanks for the pointers i will try to get to it.