At 11/27/11 01:59 AM, UltimateCJ64 wrote:
I wanted some second opinions on my title screen logo.
Just a heads up... I've heard of more than one case of people getting into trouble for using a flying toaster. Threats of legal action or what have you. So you might want to pull that out now before you get too far.
I think 'awesome snowboard' is too hard to read. 'x treme' isn't at the same angle/perspective, and 'treme' is hand-drawn (which is a personal pet peeve of mine lol) so it looks a bit sloppy. The X ...well, all the elements, really... come in too slow and far apart.
Totally diggin' the abominable snowman with guitar! I think he should be a bigger focal point. Maybe move the dude on the bottom to the top, ditch the toaster and balance it out that way (in other words, all three characters above the title).
I'm not a fan of the yellow... maybe try playing with some other colors/combos (all blue sky, add other colors to the characters, etc.)