BackDoor- Door 1
You find yourself in a strange house with only a man on the phone as a guide.
4.09 / 5.00 27,525 ViewsMini Commando
Action adventure game with nazi enemies in the second world war.
3.91 / 5.00 23,548 ViewsSo, I went out drinking today at my favorite bar "The Redlight" I was pretty bored with myself and decided I need to get some fresh air. The ride over there was pretty peaceful. I popped in some offspring to jam on the way there. It only took me about ten minutes to get to my favorite little pub. I step outside and inhale the brisk crisp October air. The smell of damp leaves around the gutter's reminded of going Trick and Treating as a kid. Walking by all those gutters at a young age, with my pumpkin head. I snuff out my cigarette and walk up the steps through the door.
As soon as i walk in, I am greeted by red neon lights, the background social chatter of people having a good time. And the classic music that echos through the room, instilling a peaceful mood that would make even the hardest man relax. "this is truly heaven I say to myself" I sit on the bar stool that seems naturally too high for someone who is only five seven. But I manage to hop on quite comfortably. I beckon the bartender in which he comes over, I ask for 3 shots of Jack Daniels. He asks for ID of which I gladly oblige. I pay him and tip, and sit down to drink the warm sustenance, and it feels good. Like warm evanescence that seems to caress me as it goes down.
After about five minutes, of which one glass is down. A pretty young thing sits next to me. Short blonde hair, blue eyes. She stands about five feet tall and has a smile that looks as if it could stop a marching band. I gesture to her if she would like a drink. She takes the offer and moves the smile my way. My heart starts to pump a little bit faster now. I can smell her perfume, it's not some cheap smell, that is overpowering and unpleasant. But rather like a fresh patch of magnolia that has just bloomed on a wet summer day.
We talk for hours, sharing our thoughts and ideas, time just seems to stop as if giving me the illusion that everything is possible since I am now living a infinite existence. We finish our drinks as the warm nectar is now warming our hearts and minds. Allowing us to be uninhibited. I ask her if she would like to come to my place and have a drink. She looks at me with those soft eyes, and that smile of which she knows is contagious.
We head back to my place and have a glass of wine, I turn on the music. Thinking of something soft, maybe classy. We take the music to my room. I look into her beautiful eyes, and she stares into mine. I brush her blonde silk hair back, she puts her arm around me. We kiss, her lips are soft and warm. We lay on the bed, her skin feels warm to the touch. Her breast is soft, we embrace in mutual need. for I know she will be gone tomorrow. We make the night last, as we both understand we may never see each other again.
A one night fling I had of which I recount. I hope you guys like it.
Nice, but why the whole novel format?
"Before you die, I'll let you know that your loot will go to waste."
Signature by coecoe123. Xbox Live: Absolute Darknes. Want to boost for GTA IV & Red Dead Redemption.
At 10/14/11 10:32 PM, Firefoxelite1 wrote: Nice, but why the whole novel format?
The whole experience was just perfect. I try to convey that so users can feel what I felt.
At 10/14/11 10:30 PM, StrapOnFetus wrote: A one night fling I had of which I recount. I hope you guys like it.
I did like it :)
Are you writter or something? I really enjoyed reading this. What happened next day? Was she there laying with you? Or Did she run away with your wallet?
At 10/14/11 10:35 PM, Ozcar wrote:
As with all good nights, sadly they must come to a end. I drove her home the next morning and never heard from her again.
one night stands are for trashy pieces of shit
hope you're proud of yourself
At 10/14/11 10:30 PM, StrapOnFetus wrote:So, I went out drinking today at my favorite bar "The Redlight"
Click to listen.
Its only rape if you say no.
Say no to rape.
I really liked this writing!
haha lucky you,getting it on with a blonde.
At 10/14/11 10:38 PM, StrapOnFetus wrote: As with all good nights, sadly they must come to a end. I drove her home the next morning and never heard from her again.
Never? D:
And I just thought it happened last night >:(
But don't worry, you might see her again in the red light :) If that happens, take her a good pic and share it with us ;)
At 10/14/11 10:44 PM, Ozcar wrote:
Will do Oscar
At 10/14/11 10:30 PM, StrapOnFetus wrote: A one night fling I had of which I recount. I hope you guys like it.
pics or it didnt happen.......u should know this by now
if my calculations are correct. When this baby hits 88 miles an hour, your gonna see some serious shit!
I liked it, real poetic in a sense. I think it would have been better if you could capture the aftermath too. Like how would someone feel looking at someone that might just really like for what could be the last time.
At 10/14/11 11:12 PM, The777Demon wrote:
You make a good point triple 7. After all, were just dust in the wind
At 10/14/11 11:23 PM, StrapOnFetus wrote:At 10/14/11 11:12 PM, The777Demon wrote:You make a good point triple 7. After all, were just dust in the wind
Indeed, would have been a nice detail but you did well trying to convey the emotions and make the reader feel like they were there with you watching. Oh and hey, you never know, maybe you will see her again sometime, should exchange numbers with her should you see her again and take photos like Ozcar suggested.
At 10/14/11 11:28 PM, SCTE3 wrote:
Next time I get some, ill take some pictures for you dirty boys. Her name with Rachel by the way,
I actually really enjoyed the detailed story compared with all of the other shit that comes through here. I've done my fair share of one night stands in my life. Those days are long over, but I tell you what, the ones that happened back in college were fucking awesome. I don't regret a single one, and wouldn't unless I got an STD.
Yea, I farm Anal Penguins. Do something about it.
At 10/14/11 11:46 PM, AnalPenguinFarming wrote:
Condoms may suck. But STD's suck even more :D
rar
[22:09:28] CASH MANN: fuck you dale
At 10/15/11 12:20 AM, Addict wrote:
We got off on the wrong foot. Let's call truce.
At 10/15/11 12:24 AM, StrapOnFetus wrote:At 10/15/11 12:20 AM, Addict wrote:We got off on the wrong foot. Let's call truce.
suck my dick
haters and defiance makes my motherfucking cock hard
[22:09:28] CASH MANN: fuck you dale
At 10/15/11 12:42 AM, StrapOnFetus wrote: Together we could rule the world :3
^^^ gay ^^^
[22:09:28] CASH MANN: fuck you dale
At 10/14/11 10:32 PM, Firefoxelite1 wrote: Nice, but why the whole novel format?
It was well written. Almost professional-looking. He used all the descriptions for a sense of imagery and I think it worked out really well. :)
I am a vagina cleaner. My Steam
In world god make every thing. Therefore God can't deid. -calvinmark
At 10/15/11 12:42 AM, Addict wrote:
I do love you, let's make love and not war :3
I wonder what that girl would've thought of you if she knew you go by StraponFetus
Come check me out!
At 10/15/11 12:53 AM, OnionsXD wrote: I wonder what that girl would've thought of you if she knew you go by StraponFetus
Wouldn't that be something. The night could of gone very wrong haha The two things you don't want to hear are "I have a headache" and "Take me home"
At 10/15/11 12:46 AM, chipotleaway wrote:At 10/14/11 10:32 PM, Firefoxelite1 wrote: Nice, but why the whole novel format?It was well written. Almost professional-looking. He used all the descriptions for a sense of imagery and I think it worked out really well. :)
Yea, I realized later that OP's not a dumb shit on the internet. He's actually literate like you and I, unlike Addict, obviously.
"Before you die, I'll let you know that your loot will go to waste."
Signature by coecoe123. Xbox Live: Absolute Darknes. Want to boost for GTA IV & Red Dead Redemption.
At 10/14/11 10:38 PM, Autokrator wrote: one night stands are for trashy pieces of shit
LMAO! Spot the guy who has never had a threesome and is more than a little jealous.
Good things come to those who wait. Post your Stat Level Ups here.
Amazing Hendrix Covers and more
sig courtesy of illicit
At 10/15/11 09:09 AM, gamejunkie wrote:At 10/14/11 10:38 PM, Autokrator wrote: one night stands are for trashy pieces of shitLMAO! Spot the guy who has never had a threesome and is more than a little jealous.
Considering his age, I don't see a problem there.
A coat of gold, a coat of red, a lion still has claws...