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A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 10:30 PM Reply

So, I went out drinking today at my favorite bar "The Redlight" I was pretty bored with myself and decided I need to get some fresh air. The ride over there was pretty peaceful. I popped in some offspring to jam on the way there. It only took me about ten minutes to get to my favorite little pub. I step outside and inhale the brisk crisp October air. The smell of damp leaves around the gutter's reminded of going Trick and Treating as a kid. Walking by all those gutters at a young age, with my pumpkin head. I snuff out my cigarette and walk up the steps through the door.

As soon as i walk in, I am greeted by red neon lights, the background social chatter of people having a good time. And the classic music that echos through the room, instilling a peaceful mood that would make even the hardest man relax. "this is truly heaven I say to myself" I sit on the bar stool that seems naturally too high for someone who is only five seven. But I manage to hop on quite comfortably. I beckon the bartender in which he comes over, I ask for 3 shots of Jack Daniels. He asks for ID of which I gladly oblige. I pay him and tip, and sit down to drink the warm sustenance, and it feels good. Like warm evanescence that seems to caress me as it goes down.

After about five minutes, of which one glass is down. A pretty young thing sits next to me. Short blonde hair, blue eyes. She stands about five feet tall and has a smile that looks as if it could stop a marching band. I gesture to her if she would like a drink. She takes the offer and moves the smile my way. My heart starts to pump a little bit faster now. I can smell her perfume, it's not some cheap smell, that is overpowering and unpleasant. But rather like a fresh patch of magnolia that has just bloomed on a wet summer day.

We talk for hours, sharing our thoughts and ideas, time just seems to stop as if giving me the illusion that everything is possible since I am now living a infinite existence. We finish our drinks as the warm nectar is now warming our hearts and minds. Allowing us to be uninhibited. I ask her if she would like to come to my place and have a drink. She looks at me with those soft eyes, and that smile of which she knows is contagious.

We head back to my place and have a glass of wine, I turn on the music. Thinking of something soft, maybe classy. We take the music to my room. I look into her beautiful eyes, and she stares into mine. I brush her blonde silk hair back, she puts her arm around me. We kiss, her lips are soft and warm. We lay on the bed, her skin feels warm to the touch. Her breast is soft, we embrace in mutual need. for I know she will be gone tomorrow. We make the night last, as we both understand we may never see each other again.

A one night fling I had of which I recount. I hope you guys like it.

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 10:32 PM Reply

Nice, but why the whole novel format?


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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 10:34 PM Reply

At 10/14/11 10:32 PM, Firefoxelite1 wrote: Nice, but why the whole novel format?

The whole experience was just perfect. I try to convey that so users can feel what I felt.

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 10:35 PM Reply

At 10/14/11 10:30 PM, StrapOnFetus wrote: A one night fling I had of which I recount. I hope you guys like it.

I did like it :)

Are you writter or something? I really enjoyed reading this. What happened next day? Was she there laying with you? Or Did she run away with your wallet?

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 10:38 PM Reply

At 10/14/11 10:35 PM, Ozcar wrote:

As with all good nights, sadly they must come to a end. I drove her home the next morning and never heard from her again.

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 10:38 PM Reply

one night stands are for trashy pieces of shit

hope you're proud of yourself


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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 10:39 PM Reply

At 10/14/11 10:30 PM, StrapOnFetus wrote:
So, I went out drinking today at my favorite bar "The Redlight"

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 10:43 PM Reply

I really liked this writing!
haha lucky you,getting it on with a blonde.


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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 10:44 PM Reply

At 10/14/11 10:38 PM, StrapOnFetus wrote: As with all good nights, sadly they must come to a end. I drove her home the next morning and never heard from her again.

Never? D:

And I just thought it happened last night >:(

But don't worry, you might see her again in the red light :) If that happens, take her a good pic and share it with us ;)

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 10:53 PM Reply

At 10/14/11 10:44 PM, Ozcar wrote:

Will do Oscar

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 11:04 PM Reply

At 10/14/11 10:30 PM, StrapOnFetus wrote: A one night fling I had of which I recount. I hope you guys like it.

pics or it didnt happen.......u should know this by now


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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 11:23 PM Reply

At 10/14/11 11:12 PM, The777Demon wrote:

You make a good point triple 7. After all, were just dust in the wind

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 11:28 PM Reply

At 10/14/11 11:23 PM, StrapOnFetus wrote:
At 10/14/11 11:12 PM, The777Demon wrote:
You make a good point triple 7. After all, were just dust in the wind

Indeed, would have been a nice detail but you did well trying to convey the emotions and make the reader feel like they were there with you watching. Oh and hey, you never know, maybe you will see her again sometime, should exchange numbers with her should you see her again and take photos like Ozcar suggested.


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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 11:43 PM Reply

At 10/14/11 11:28 PM, SCTE3 wrote:

Next time I get some, ill take some pictures for you dirty boys. Her name with Rachel by the way,

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 14th, 2011 @ 11:46 PM Reply

I actually really enjoyed the detailed story compared with all of the other shit that comes through here. I've done my fair share of one night stands in my life. Those days are long over, but I tell you what, the ones that happened back in college were fucking awesome. I don't regret a single one, and wouldn't unless I got an STD.


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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 12:02 AM Reply

At 10/14/11 11:46 PM, AnalPenguinFarming wrote:

Condoms may suck. But STD's suck even more :D

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 12:08 AM Reply

I lol'd.


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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 12:24 AM Reply

At 10/15/11 12:20 AM, Addict wrote:

We got off on the wrong foot. Let's call truce.

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 12:42 AM Reply

Together we could rule the world :3

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 12:46 AM Reply

At 10/14/11 10:32 PM, Firefoxelite1 wrote: Nice, but why the whole novel format?

It was well written. Almost professional-looking. He used all the descriptions for a sense of imagery and I think it worked out really well. :)


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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 12:51 AM Reply

At 10/15/11 12:42 AM, Addict wrote:

I do love you, let's make love and not war :3

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 12:53 AM Reply

I wonder what that girl would've thought of you if she knew you go by StraponFetus


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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 12:58 AM Reply

At 10/15/11 12:53 AM, OnionsXD wrote: I wonder what that girl would've thought of you if she knew you go by StraponFetus

Wouldn't that be something. The night could of gone very wrong haha The two things you don't want to hear are "I have a headache" and "Take me home"

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 08:51 AM Reply

At 10/15/11 12:46 AM, chipotleaway wrote:
At 10/14/11 10:32 PM, Firefoxelite1 wrote: Nice, but why the whole novel format?
It was well written. Almost professional-looking. He used all the descriptions for a sense of imagery and I think it worked out really well. :)

Yea, I realized later that OP's not a dumb shit on the internet. He's actually literate like you and I, unlike Addict, obviously.


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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 09:09 AM Reply

At 10/14/11 10:38 PM, Autokrator wrote: one night stands are for trashy pieces of shit

LMAO! Spot the guy who has never had a threesome and is more than a little jealous.

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 09:25 AM Reply

At 10/15/11 09:09 AM, gamejunkie wrote:
At 10/14/11 10:38 PM, Autokrator wrote: one night stands are for trashy pieces of shit
LMAO! Spot the guy who has never had a threesome and is more than a little jealous.

Considering his age, I don't see a problem there.

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 09:30 AM Reply

your descriptive bullshit was annoying i wanted to just read about someones sexual failures to make myself feel better but now i had to read five chapters in a novel to do it


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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 09:37 AM Reply

At 10/15/11 09:25 AM, MercatorMapV2 wrote:
At 10/15/11 09:09 AM, gamejunkie wrote:
At 10/14/11 10:38 PM, Autokrator wrote: one night stands are for trashy pieces of shit
LMAO! Spot the guy who has never had a threesome and is more than a little jealous.
Considering his age, I don't see a problem there.

How do you know how old he is? It's not in his profile. Do you know this person or are you just guessing?

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 09:42 AM Reply

At 10/15/11 09:37 AM, gamejunkie wrote:
At 10/15/11 09:25 AM, MercatorMapV2 wrote:
At 10/15/11 09:09 AM, gamejunkie wrote:
At 10/14/11 10:38 PM, Autokrator wrote: one night stands are for trashy pieces of shit
LMAO! Spot the guy who has never had a threesome and is more than a little jealous.
Considering his age, I don't see a problem there.
How do you know how old he is? It's not in his profile. Do you know this person or are you just guessing?

Using heuristics, one can reasonably inference that he's about 14. That, and my past interactions with him lead me to that conclusion as well.

Only kids hide their age on newgrounds.

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Response to A one night stand. Oct. 15th, 2011 @ 09:50 AM Reply

At 10/15/11 09:42 AM, MercatorMapV2 wrote: Only kids hide their age on newgrounds.

I kind of assumed you had some knowledge of this. Where as I didn't. And I agree with what you said here, but I don't like to make assumptions.