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Here's a story for you /n/ 2011-09-24 17:15:03

A teenage girl about 17 had gone to visit some friends one evening and time passed quickly as each shared their various experiences of the past year. She ended up staying longer than planned, and had to walk home alone. She wasn't afraid because it was a small town and she lived only a few blocks away. As she walked along under the tall elm trees, Diane asked God to keep her safe from harm and danger. When she reached the alley, which was a short cut to her house, she decided to take it. However, halfway down the alley she noticed a man standing at the end as though he was waiting for her. She became uneasy and began to pray, asking for God's protection. Instantly a comforting feeling of quietness and security wrapped round her, she felt as though someone was walking with her. When she reached the end of the alley, she got fucking raped.


A lot of people have pictures for their signatures. But that's stupid. I'm not going to do that. That is so 2008. Not even kidding. Jeez, you guys are stoopid.

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Response to Here's a story for you /n/ 2011-09-24 17:16:36

10/10 would read again


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Response to Here's a story for you /n/ 2011-09-24 17:18:25

The ending wasn't good. But it was slightly funny. Also, since it's fictional, shouldn't it technically go into the Writing forum?

I give it a 4/10.


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Response to Here's a story for you /n/ 2011-09-24 17:18:40

The moral of the story : God is a sick rapist

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Response to Here's a story for you /n/ 2011-09-24 17:20:26

Writing forum.


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