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Comments needed. 2011-09-23 06:56:38 Reply

I need some more advise before I can start making Madness Combat AV (anime version) manga. Comments please :)

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Response to Comments needed. 2011-09-23 07:08:25 Reply

Well the character design is quite boring. It looks like the only way you can distinguish the characters is by what they're wearing.

A decent rule to follow with character design is that if you can't distinguish your characters by silhouette alone then you should rethink their designs.


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Response to Comments needed. 2011-09-23 07:21:18 Reply

At 9/23/11 07:08 AM, Aigis wrote: Well the character design is quite boring. It looks like the only way you can distinguish the characters is by what they're wearing.

A decent rule to follow with character design is that if you can't distinguish your characters by silhouette alone then you should rethink their designs.

+1 to this. They all look the same to me... But, i know i never could draw anything close to this. Everyone is a critic....


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Response to Comments needed. 2011-09-23 09:48:45 Reply

At 9/23/11 07:21 AM, ProntoOne wrote:
At 9/23/11 07:08 AM, Aigis wrote: Well the character design is quite boring. It looks like the only way you can distinguish the characters is by what they're wearing.

A decent rule to follow with character design is that if you can't distinguish your characters by silhouette alone then you should rethink their designs.
+1 to this. They all look the same to me... But, i know i never could draw anything close to this. Everyone is a critic....

The originals all had the same body shape and no faces. I was personally thinking the faces are all so similar they might as well not have them anyways. But that's kind of fitting in a remake of faceless Rayman people.

I say you should distinguish the clown a bit more by making his faceplate bigger.

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Response to Comments needed. 2011-09-23 09:58:11 Reply

Anime huh? Interesting. I can't really crit anything yeat since I only see a portion of the whole story but you might want to brush up on anatomy.


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Response to Comments needed. 2011-09-23 10:35:58 Reply

keep in mind guys, all of the madness characters look the same except for clothes :3 I'd say anime is about the best choice for an interpretation xD


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Response to Comments needed. 2011-09-23 10:57:17 Reply

The originals may have all looked the exact same, but when you're converting them into actual people, that gives you room to play around with their physical characteristics.