At 10/16/11 03:15 PM, boypisces wrote:
At 10/16/11 03:06 PM, dante224 wrote:
its so... awkward... the frame by frame, the line work, the pacing...Could you perhaps point out a bit in the sample where you felt that that either the timing or the presentation was out of place? Just so I can tweak it later on.
none of it feels fluent or realistic. its not even quite cartoony enough to be absurd and silly. its just... mediocre =/
work on the presentation and timing
the voice sync seems to come in with unnatural pauses, there is no purpose for the mystery man hitting him on the head, there are an abundance of pointless pauses in the speech, there is obvious feedback coming in and out for the VA that cuts up the animation, the linework is choppy, but thats really the least of the issue.
simply, there are many spots where its unnecessarily slow... try and watch it again to figure out what to do about it =)