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micky315
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Constructive Criticism? 2011-09-04 02:28:00 Reply

just wanna know what you think.

http://notsofancy.deviantart.com/gallery /30657823#/d48sqyz

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Response to Constructive Criticism? 2011-09-04 04:27:01 Reply

I suggest posting pics in the forums, rather than just linking to another site. It's much more appealing for anyone considering to give feedback

Also LoL is cool

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Response to Constructive Criticism? 2011-09-04 09:43:53 Reply

The only thing is see that's wrong is that part where it's all wavy and distorted. but it's pretty good.


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Response to Constructive Criticism? 2011-09-04 09:49:45 Reply

Pretty much everything is disproportionate, but I can't really help because I don't really have much of a way with words when it comes to art. All I can really say is, one hand is bigger than the other and they both look blocky, the end of the sword looks a bit weird and wavy and distorted like the above poster said, the breasts are uneven and more egg-shaped than really supposed to be, the boots are uneven as well, and the hair clumps unnaturally.

I'm really sorry that I can't offer constructive criticism, but hopefully all this will help you at least see your flaws.


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Response to Constructive Criticism? 2011-09-04 11:49:11 Reply

everything is kinda awkward IMO. the armor looks uncorfortable, and her expression and pose tell me that she needs some pepto-bismol before that big battle :D I would also take a sharpen tool to the whole entire thing, it's rather blurry. there are also some proportional concerns, but I don't have time to get to that so. HAVE FUN :D


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Response to Constructive Criticism? 2011-09-04 12:13:02 Reply

To everyone that commented on the wavy, distorted end of the sword; it's supposed to look like that, read up on the characters lore at leagueoflegends.com


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Response to Constructive Criticism? 2011-09-04 20:55:19 Reply

At 9/4/11 12:13 PM, micky315 wrote: To everyone that commented on the wavy, distorted end of the sword; it's supposed to look like that, read up on the characters lore at leagueoflegends.com

lol, yo so funny girl