The Enchanted Cave 2
Delve into a strange cave with a seemingly endless supply of treasure, strategically choos
4.39 / 5.00 38,635 ViewsGhostbusters B.I.P.
COMPLETE edition of the interactive "choose next panel" comic
4.09 / 5.00 15,161 Viewsjust wanna know what you think.
http://notsofancy.deviantart.com/gallery /30657823#/d48sqyz
If you're on DA, favs are welsome :D
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I suggest posting pics in the forums, rather than just linking to another site. It's much more appealing for anyone considering to give feedback
Also LoL is cool
The only thing is see that's wrong is that part where it's all wavy and distorted. but it's pretty good.
Pretty much everything is disproportionate, but I can't really help because I don't really have much of a way with words when it comes to art. All I can really say is, one hand is bigger than the other and they both look blocky, the end of the sword looks a bit weird and wavy and distorted like the above poster said, the breasts are uneven and more egg-shaped than really supposed to be, the boots are uneven as well, and the hair clumps unnaturally.
I'm really sorry that I can't offer constructive criticism, but hopefully all this will help you at least see your flaws.
be my fan... because.
everything is kinda awkward IMO. the armor looks uncorfortable, and her expression and pose tell me that she needs some pepto-bismol before that big battle :D I would also take a sharpen tool to the whole entire thing, it's rather blurry. there are also some proportional concerns, but I don't have time to get to that so. HAVE FUN :D
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To everyone that commented on the wavy, distorted end of the sword; it's supposed to look like that, read up on the characters lore at leagueoflegends.com
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At 9/4/11 12:13 PM, micky315 wrote: To everyone that commented on the wavy, distorted end of the sword; it's supposed to look like that, read up on the characters lore at leagueoflegends.com
lol, yo so funny girl