Guys... obvious trolls are obvious, come on... I'd expect from NG.
Anyway, thanks for the judges. I was a little disappointed at the lack of more detailed feedback, vis-a-vis the previous contest I entered, but given the amount of entries on hand, I guess it was to be expected and I thank them for the time taken and I'll take their critique on board for next time.
Which basically means: first time, I told, not showed, which was boring, this time I showed, and didn't tell, which was incomprehensible! Guess I need to find a better middle ground.