My latest concept art!

[Syringes]

Just wanted to know what you guys had to say about this!

I worked hard on it, the coloring may not be perfect, but I am still very proud of it. C&C are welcome!

Also, my first time posting here, I read the rules but if I in someway effed up then I am sorry. :L I never post in the forums here on newgrounds.

For a waaaaaaay larger version, go here, i just submitted it to ng.

http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/syrin ges/concept-idea

[InvertedComas]

looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove it
rlly its great y could start saying a few things but... its late so just greeeeeaaaat

[jeeshwa123]

the only problem I have with it (and it isss a huge off-put IMO) is the angle and lack of emotion. the atmosphere is just a little wierd. I feel like the kid should be more DYNAMIC looking y'know? it just feels a bit cluttered. i'll try to post a picture and elaborate or something. xD

otherwise, the art is good and you have a lot of talent :D you should know by now that you're a pretty damn good artist ^^

[jeeshwa123]

this is what i mean:

[DeliciousOrange]

jeshwa pretty much hit the nail on the head, the composition is majorly cramped into the lower center of the piece. He offered one solution, but you could alter the perspective in a number of ways to help improve the the layout of the elements. Also consider rendering the ice a bit more carefully, there's a missed opportunity to include a story behind why the character is hanging off the ledge (such as did they slide off? Then there would be a track of scraped ice and snow leading to the edge).