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YomToxic
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I'm trying drawing again. Aug. 28th, 2011 @ 09:49 AM Reply

You know how it rolls, constructive criticism always welcome.

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/65cb 5f46911eb478f43e44800ecb5890

This time, I'm trying to draw Hallway 2 of a small, yet high security prison.

Thanks in advance!

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Response to I'm trying drawing again. Aug. 28th, 2011 @ 01:25 PM Reply

At 8/28/11 09:49 AM, YomToxic wrote: You know how it rolls, constructive criticism always welcome.

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/65cb 5f46911eb478f43e44800ecb5890

This time, I'm trying to draw Hallway 2 of a small, yet high security prison.

Thanks in advance!

Those doors tops should be slanted up like the rest of the hallway. There's not much to say here, its nothing amazing and it's pretty damn gray. Also, most cells have barred gates, not doorways


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Response to I'm trying drawing again. Aug. 28th, 2011 @ 08:42 PM Reply

The doors seem to be in the right perspective to me.

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Response to I'm trying drawing again. Aug. 28th, 2011 @ 08:50 PM Reply

Looks great to me, perspective is accurate. I'd suggest you google some prison images and use them as reference to add detail. There's certainly room for more detail, it adds believability.


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Response to I'm trying drawing again. Aug. 29th, 2011 @ 01:00 AM Reply

Okay, details, like wall textures, cracks, posters and stuff, right?