Critique Please

[KLT1M]

i want to get noticed so i need help with my artwork......... here ya go

http://art.ngfiles.com/images/144/klt1m_
ninja.jpg

[KLT1M]

lol

[Flowers10]

im in a good mood, so i will throw you a crit.
her head is too big, her eyes are too. why is her nose just a pencil mark?
her mouth is too low, she doesnt even have a chin.
her left hand cannot be bent like that its physically impossible.
Her arms are also a bit short they should come just under the crotch when hanged loose.
it looks like she has a bit of a belly, is she pregnant?
the gun is all flat. i like her legs though, those are good.

the lightning is badly done, you should pick a light source and stick with it, what i do is pick a spot where the light is coming from, imagine myself sitting at that spot, everything i see from there should be lighted, the rest should be shadow.

And you have messy lines, try to do everything in 1 line instead of doing 3 for the same.

I do not say all this to be negative towards you, im just letting you know what you can improve on.
Dont take it personally

[KLT1M]

ok then ill look at some or your art work to get better idea

[Hyptosis]

So you drew this 100% from scratch? No references or anything? I just wanna double check before my next post.

[Sweetsweetback]

the pose is weird to me. i would suggest figuring out the pose in thumbnails before going to final. that's what i do anyway.

[KLT1M]

yup your right i did not look at anything to draw this

[KLT1M]

thanks for the help

[KLT1M]

At 8/23/11 08:55 AM, Flowers10 wrote:

How about this one, is it better.

[lostlore]

I wanted to try it!

[KLT1M]

At 8/25/11 02:01 AM, lostlore wrote: I wanted to try it!

i like that background