At 5/2/12 07:02 PM, lovingthedark wrote:
I've already turned this in to school so it isn't urgent, but can I get a final bit of critique on it so I can fix up any remaining problems over my gloriously free summer break which starts tomorrow oh my god yes finally? I plan to post it in the portal once I've attacked it one more time.
First off, I must say I really like the way you drew the face. It kinda gets a certain "mood" across, but I can't express it properly. Either way, it is good. :)
I was thinking why it feels to me that the background doesn't fit the pic and I assume it's the much lower contrast between the darks and lights in comparison to the contrast on the face. Probably the same with the rope.
Sorry that I can't put my finger directly on it, but I think the background needs some tweaking to make the whole pic look more homogeneous.
Maybe someone else can step in from this point and help you more specifically. Or tell me if I am wrong. :P
But I like the drawing already a lot.