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Response to my drawing 2011-08-18 12:56:28

At 8/18/11 12:45 PM, mega-supreme wrote: i'm adding movement as a test, what do you think?

I think you should add a little more twist in the hips or shoulders. For movement, try not to make the hips and shoulders parallel.
Also perhaps add a little more bend in to the back to show some weight to the movement.

Since this drawing a little far in to the render to try and fix. Perhaps another new drawing, and start with a new drawing and post your wips as you make them. SAtart out with your frame and then show us your build up do we can give you advice as you develop the drawing.


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Response to my drawing 2011-08-18 13:06:12

sure, thanks for the help.

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-18 17:15:15

is this sort of what you mean?

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-18 17:35:08

At 8/18/11 05:15 PM, mega-supreme wrote: is this sort of what you mean?

Well, yes.
The torso loos a little long, You may want to shorten it.
His knees are bent way to much. At the moment, if he was actually posed like that, he would most likely topple over, and thats after his ankles, knees and muscles from both begin to hurt like they got butt fucked by an elephant.
You'll want to bring one or the other knee up and its foot forward. It'll look much more stable.

Get the back to bend a little more it'll give a much better feel of motion.

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-18 18:05:33

do you teach art? you're 100 times better than my school teacher, and i'll try and fix it up. thanks for the help.

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-18 18:17:43

At 8/18/11 06:05 PM, mega-supreme wrote: do you teach art? you're 100 times better than my school teacher, and i'll try and fix it up. thanks for the help.

Me.... in charge of peoples minds?
Tempting, but probably a bad idea.


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Response to my drawing 2011-08-18 18:56:50

mark 1.1, i think that's about right.

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-18 19:07:11

At 8/18/11 06:56 PM, mega-supreme wrote: mark 1.1, i think that's about right.

Thats much better. He doesn't look like he would be in so much pain now.
Now, though He looks a little like a batter just about to take a swing. Although you can use that pose to your advantage if you want.
By adding more twist to the torso, or by curving the spine back a little more will add some more dynamic to this.
Adding twist is a bit difficult, I have issues with it all the time. But with some practice you should be able to do it much easier.

If you are having trouble with a pose in the future, get up and try out the pose for yourself if possible. If you have a large mirror, do it in front of that and be sure to watch the way your body moves. Also, don't forget to look up reference if you can. As with both methods I have presented here, the core concept is that if you can see it, it is usually easier to accomplish in your work.
As you grow as an artist, and years down the road, you will rely on your experience more than reference. So keep practicing.


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Response to my drawing 2011-08-18 19:07:32

i wonder, should the legs be longer?

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-18 19:10:10

At 8/18/11 07:07 PM, mega-supreme wrote: i wonder, should the legs be longer?

Nah, they're fine. They could be a little thicker though. The guy's top heavy.

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-18 19:16:14

i think the stuff he's going to wear will balance that out.

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-19 05:48:15

the length of the legs is fine since theyre foreshortened a bit; I do think his hips are pretty thin and his shoulders really broad.


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Response to my drawing 2011-08-19 14:59:10

i like your art, could you have a look at mine i am also trying to get noticed :D

here is my newest one

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-19 15:02:40

At 8/19/11 02:59 PM, KLT1M wrote: i like your art, could you have a look at mine i am also trying to get noticed :D

here is my newest one

Make your own thread, hon. ;)

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-19 16:39:55

try making a thread and just hope people try to be helpful. LOL

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-19 19:16:35

here is what i have so far, it's not too clear or full of detail. But for now i'm more interested knowing if it looks OK.

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-19 19:33:49

something, i just remembered does anyone have a few tips on shading.

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-20 17:09:46

i think that's about right

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-20 18:59:22

That last one is sweet. Try a climactic fight between talented duelists, that would be really sweet.

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-20 19:24:38

At 8/20/11 06:59 PM, Exgesis wrote: That last one is sweet. Try a climactic fight between talented duelists, that would be really sweet.

i would do ichigo and ulquiorra . However to ANYONE who finds this if you name two anime characters i'll do them instead. (however i don't think anyone will name just two characters, LOL)

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-20 20:05:51

Work on your muscle mass and anatomy.
Try a little more dynamic as well.


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Response to my drawing 2011-08-20 20:36:36

what would you give it out of 10? (i'm not expecting a high score)

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-20 21:03:07

At 8/20/11 08:36 PM, mega-supreme wrote: what would you give it out of 10? (i'm not expecting a high score)

About a 4. You got an extra point for finishing your drawings, which is something I have trouble doing.


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Response to my drawing 2011-08-20 21:10:45

At 8/20/11 08:36 PM, mega-supreme wrote: what would you give it out of 10? (i'm not expecting a high score)

His hands are too small, but I give you a 7 for effort and time you put into this. The rest of it is pretty kool, neat character.


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Response to my drawing 2011-08-20 21:12:52

At 8/20/11 09:03 PM, FlyingNinjaBannanas wrote:
At 8/20/11 08:36 PM, mega-supreme wrote: what would you give it out of 10? (i'm not expecting a high score)
About a 4. You got an extra point for finishing your drawings, which is something I have trouble doing.

would you say it's worth turning into digital art?

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-20 23:07:50

infact i'm going to try something nice and easy. for example a character i made up myself, that will speed things up a bit

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-22 23:21:12

working like a dog. fixed up a few things before coloring and it's far from being finished. just posting it up to see what you think.

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-23 17:50:14

Oh wow. That Ichigo (the second drawing?) is AWESOME.


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Response to my drawing 2011-08-23 20:11:07

i'm going to get a backround too

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Response to my drawing 2011-08-23 23:43:04

sleepy time

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