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chrisyrulz
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Pin up Girl 2011-07-28 23:21:19 Reply

Hi guys, just wanted to know what you guys thought of my tattoo design. I thought it suited posting on Newgrounds as it looks like a nice standalone piece. I'm quite happy with it, but would like to know your thoughts :) This is also up in the Art Portal so if you like it feel free to review it :) Thanks .

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Response to Pin up Girl 2011-07-28 23:24:14 Reply

looks great keep up the good work.

just look at it!

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Response to Pin up Girl 2011-07-28 23:27:24 Reply

Thanks a lot! I'll do my best :D

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Response to Pin up Girl 2011-07-28 23:30:06 Reply

Not bad. The line weight and its variety is good. Breasts are placed too high, though; the cleavage is where the collarbone should be.

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Response to Pin up Girl 2011-07-28 23:32:27 Reply

Can't believe I didn't realise this before, thanks for pointing that out. That's exactly what I needed to hear to improve :)

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Response to Pin up Girl 2011-07-28 23:32:42 Reply

i noticed that my self only thing that really stands out that i can see.

just look at it!