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Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 )

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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-04 20:15:40 Reply

I noticed something wrong with it and I had to re-upload. That is probably the cause of the problem.


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-04 20:40:41 Reply

At 8/4/11 08:15 PM, LazyModeComics wrote: I noticed something wrong with it and I had to re-upload. That is probably the cause of the problem.

Huh, I had no problems with it. That was great!

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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-04 20:44:40 Reply

At 8/4/11 07:49 PM, LazyModeComics wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/57 6224

I must say, I'm a bit scared. Great job!

Also, I WILL finish this time! I can guarantee it!

*Not a guarantee

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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-04 20:45:14 Reply

My least favorite part of the competition is the eliminations..
Next year I say NO ELIMINATIONS! everyone gets money!


"So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past."
-F. Scott Fitzgerald

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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-04 22:31:26 Reply

As usual, I "finished" tonight, and I'm going to try to post a polished version with a better menu and credits in the morning.

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/b038 81e332845afd7c8aef0b333daf5c

THE GREATEST CAKE TO EVER EXIST EVER.


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-04 22:53:25 Reply

At 8/4/11 10:31 PM, Elfman-Rox wrote: As usual, I "finished" tonight, and I'm going to try to post a polished version with a better menu and credits in the morning.

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/b038 81e332845afd7c8aef0b333daf5c

THE GREATEST CAKE TO EVER EXIST EVER.

dude the cyclical nature of the phone joke was pretty freakin priceless. Wonderful take on the theme. This round IS gonna be hard ... as the two pieces are polar opposites.

great work to both of you.


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-04 23:17:07 Reply

Nice job elfman!

And looks like sandwich eater is cutting it awfully close!


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-04 23:17:15 Reply

Wow! That looks like a hard choice between the two on that end! Great job both of you!

Now Sandwich Eater, lets see yours. FACE ME! lol

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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-04 23:31:54 Reply

30 Minutes Left...!!


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-04 23:32:00 Reply

I'm about to upload it lol.
I've done more than half of it in the last 24 hours :P


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-04 23:35:06 Reply

At 8/4/11 11:32 PM, sandwich-eater wrote: I'm about to upload it lol.
I've done more than half of it in the last 24 hours :P

Oh geez! Lets hope that paid off!

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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-04 23:49:40 Reply

Pfft... I still have like, 10 minutes.


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-04 23:59:53 Reply

Round 3 is now CLOSED!!


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-05 00:00:32 Reply

At 8/4/11 11:49 PM, sandwich-eater wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/57 6230
Pfft... I still have like, 10 minutes.

Fun stuff! Nice job on that crazy shapeshifting 4D thingy lol

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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-05 00:02:04 Reply

At 8/4/11 11:32 PM, sandwich-eater wrote: I've done more than half of it in the last 24 hours :P

You can probably tell by the... everything.

Anyway I loved yours elfman. The visuals are better and it's extremely funny!
I'll go take a look at lazymode's.


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-05 00:23:03 Reply

Haha nice work LazyMode!
The concept was really awesome! as well as the execution!

And I love your easter egg Dave ;D


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-05 02:37:38 Reply

This is getting tense, I'm so excited!

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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-05 07:45:24 Reply

At 8/4/11 11:49 PM, sandwich-eater wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/57 6230
Pfft... I still have like, 10 minutes.

How hard was is to make the 4D tesseract? It confuses me just to look at it.


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-05 07:53:19 Reply

At 8/5/11 07:45 AM, Elfman-Rox wrote:
At 8/4/11 11:49 PM, sandwich-eater wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/57 6230
Pfft... I still have like, 10 minutes.
How hard was is to make the 4D tesseract? It confuses me just to look at it.

I traced that exact gif :P

That doesn't count as cheating, right?

But yeah it was still quite confusing. I basically drew the inner cube and the outer cube then connected them. I had to go back to fix a few frames.


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-05 15:22:00 Reply

I promise I'll get reviews for this round done by Sunday. Sorry about last round, work is gettin' a bit crazy.

As far as the last round's reviews go, I'll see if I can get them done next weekend. Sorry :<

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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-05 17:24:38 Reply

Herp derp.


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-08 00:11:40 Reply

The winners are in!

The winners of the semi-finals are....

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Dave Bruno and Lazy Mode Comics!

Results will be posted to the website soon, as well as the final round...


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-08 00:14:42 Reply

Well, best of luck to the both of you in the final round. Congrats, LazyJakePerson


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-08 00:20:44 Reply

Yes congratulations and best of luck!

I'm lucky to have made it this far and it was fun while it lasted.


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-08 00:23:14 Reply

Strangely enough, LazyModeComics and I have always scored within five points of each other in each round. I'm pretty eager to see if we were close in score this time around.


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-08 00:25:30 Reply

The winners of the semi-finals are....
Dave Bruno and Lazy Mode Comics!

My predictions were correct!

But both Elfman and Sandwich made awesome submissions.

Congrats to everyone, you are all winners in my heart <3

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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-08 00:27:08 Reply

...wow, he really clobbered me. Great job to all others, as it seems that I was the weakest link this time around.


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-08 00:53:32 Reply

The gap between Dave and I was smaller than expected :o
I also thought Elfy would've scored a bit higher.


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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-08 01:05:57 Reply

I just emailed Nitwitt my reviews for Dave and Lazy.

Elf and Sandwich, I have your reviews written but because I'm so sleep deprived, they're mostly incoherent and useless.

HOWEVER, the common theme between yours both (and brace yourself, I'm being harsh here) is:

You have done nothing to take advantage of the medium of animation and honestly, these would have made better comics or live action skits. Because you don't have any interesting visuals or extreme poses or anything that only a cartoon could do, you would have been way better off getting yourself a bunch of actors and just shooting a video. Your framing/composition was mostly flat and boring, the character animation itself, while smoothed out, lacked any sort of energy or emotion (they literally just stand there talking as if they were strapped to a wooden board of some sort).

Now I'm not saying you're terrible at animation and that you should feel bad, but you need to do something that a camera can't do. That's what will make it a worthy animation.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kyc4JK24E uI

I can't tell you how many times I've watched this trailer. Yes, I know what happens in it. Yes, I've seen this a billion times, but seeing Atlas getting crushed at the end never gets old because of how gnarly and visceral the animation in it is, and this could only ever have happened if it were an animation. That's what makes an animation worthy-- spectacular visuals that make rewatching it alone worth it, not some convoluted or complex script (because if I want to watch a sitcom, I'll watch a sitcom and not a cartoon)

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Anyways, I'll try and get full reviews for you when I'm more coherent/get more sleep.

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Response to Round 3! ( T O F A 2011 ) 2011-08-08 02:19:14 Reply

At 8/8/11 12:53 AM, sandwich-eater wrote: The gap between Dave and I was smaller than expected :o
I also thought Elfy would've scored a bit higher.

Me too, if I may be so blunt. You really stepped up your A Game here Sandwich, I hope to see you compete again next year! Its been a pleasure facing you ::bow::

Why didnt Zeurel review this round by the way?