Programming, good. Well, I'll try to help out a bit here. Namely by ripping one thing apart, but hey.
Before I go into this, from what I can tell, the second thing has nothing seriously wrong with it due to its simplicity. Its style is such that not very much can be ascertained from it. I would say to change the tree trunks from squares to more organic shaping.
At 6/24/11 05:01 AM, Kibester wrote:
Kitchen Outline: This is a kitchen outline I did for an animation I never finished. All done using line tool. Perspective right? What looks wrong?
I'm guessing this is older.
First off, the window is off. As illustrated, this is due to the lines not matching up with its lower counterparts. The lower two appear to follow each other appropriately, but the top one does not. This gives the appearance of an extremely unusually shaped window.
The sun in the picture disturbs me. As far as I know, there is a perfectly good circle tool in flash. Use that; don't try to be fancy with line curves.
The overhang on the kitchen counter is unusual if not portrayed wrong. I have never seen a counter with overhang that exists solely on the flanks. There is no indication of any of the counter hanging over the structure in any other part of the furnishing.
The doors under the kitchen sink are built as if they are two separate compartments, rather than one large space like every kitchen sink I've seen is. The handles should be close to each other to facilitate their opening away from the center, so there is one space, not as if the hinge is in the middle.
Lastly, the large boxy object in the middle of the room looks weird. I cannot exactly put my finger on why, but I think it has something to do with its height compared to everything else.
Hope that helped slightly.