Owenn's Art

[Owenn]

Hey y'all, I figured I should make an art thread so I can post WIPs and stuff like that.

[Hopje]

Hey there,

Nice start, try working some more on smoothing the edges and add some more detail to the forehead, it's a little plain compared to the rest of the drawing :). Great job, but that background makes me hiigh

[bigjonny13]

Is your fatcat account dead?

[Owenn]

Yeah, I wanted a more "portfolio-esque" account if you know what I mean

[test-object]

You need some more correct and darker shading. Shading never works in jagged lines, but always in smooth shapes. You can find explanation on this right about everywhere. Smoothen the outlines (as mentioned above) and perhaps put some detail in the feet. Right now they're body-painted. He's obviously wearing shoes, so you might wanna actually draw them.

I also noticed he doesn't seem to have shoulders or armpits. Maybe it's to make it look more chubby, but you might want to look into that if you missed it.

Looking good tho :)

[Owenn]

Thanks for the advice man, I'll try to make it look more smooth.

[Owenn]

I'm starting to try smoother lines on this guy. WIP