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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 28th, 2011 @ 02:23 PM

At 7/28/11 02:22 PM, rendibsivad wrote: This is me playing a shitty game. Thats the face I make when theres a time limit, and awful controls.

oh thats the face I make when the time limit is up.


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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 28th, 2011 @ 02:48 PM

DANGNAMIT!!

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 28th, 2011 @ 02:51 PM

At 7/28/11 02:48 PM, rendibsivad wrote: DANGNAMIT!!

looking good dude.


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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 28th, 2011 @ 03:51 PM

heres a warmup drawing of sometinhg..

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 28th, 2011 @ 05:21 PM

a skecth for 15 minutes. WHY DO YOU GUYS IGNORE?!

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 28th, 2011 @ 05:43 PM

Looks unfinished, his left arm is too thick at the wrist.

At 7/28/11 05:21 PM, rendibsivad wrote: WHY DO YOU GUYS IGNORE?!

Look at all the other art threads in the forum, they don't get as much responses either. But the more you whine about it the less likely someone will respond.

Ask for specific advice, if you need it and don't expect people to give you indepth critique for a 15 minutes sketch. People won't spend more time reviewing than you spent drawing.

At 7/28/11 05:21 PM, rendibsivad wrote: a skecth for 15 minutes.

^ This

Also conversing with your "friend's account" that draws almost like you and to which you coincidentally also have access to, doesn't help either.

Sorry to be harsh, but you asked for it several times and this is how I see it honestly.

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 28th, 2011 @ 08:35 PM

Not trying to be rude, and you're certainly not bad, but there's something about your style that slightly annoys me. I think it's the way most of it looks really sketchy and quickly made. Take your time with your work. Your line art looks almost like you drew it at a low opacity for some reason, you should try doing in just with a solid black brush, I think it'd look less messy that way.
So basically do what other people are saying and refine these son'bitches so they look more solid and well done rather than sloppy and sketchy. Though you do appear to have improved some since the thread started.

Oh, and if you want people to post here more, do some bigger projects. You make a 15 minute sketch of a very simple character like you've been doing, people'll think "Thats neat", but if you do a bigass picture of something really awesome looking with really tiny details, people will have an urge to praise you. I find that on the art forum people often only post if they're really impressed or you're so bad they can't resist calling you on it.

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 28th, 2011 @ 09:36 PM

This... this wip is a MASTERPIECE!! (why?) I think my lines are getting smoother and less wobbly and plus.. I think its detailed as well!

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 28th, 2011 @ 09:42 PM

At 7/28/11 09:36 PM, rendibsivad wrote: This... this wip is a MASTERPIECE!! (why?) I think my lines are getting smoother and less wobbly and plus.. I think its detailed as well!

Looking awesome so far. I've concluded that the lack of detail in your previous work is probably what's annoying me. Most of what you've drawn are weird critters that don't wear clothes and have very basic anatomy, which there's nothing wrong with, but when it's almost all you draw it gets boring.

But yeah, this piece is looking great.

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 29th, 2011 @ 11:47 AM

Not enough red and the computer wont let me color it anymore. fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 29th, 2011 @ 05:59 PM

what the...

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 31st, 2011 @ 01:05 PM

Dis good line quality? :o Its an experiment.

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 31st, 2011 @ 02:53 PM

At 7/29/11 05:59 PM, rendibsivad wrote: what the...

Hell? HAY!! THATS NOT ME!! THATS AN IMPOSTER!!!

:cause he dont have no dick nose. :

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 31st, 2011 @ 02:58 PM

mmm

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Jul. 31st, 2011 @ 10:52 PM

I think I draw like egoraptor now... Do I?

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 1st, 2011 @ 08:09 AM

How the hell did THIS get here?

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 3rd, 2011 @ 07:47 PM

OH MY GAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWDDDDDDDDD!!!

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 3rd, 2011 @ 10:57 PM

I think you jump around too much. Your stuff is not bad. I like most of it. Your line quality is improving but you seem to have no attention span for you pieces. It's either quick and dirty pics or pieces that time forgot. Also commenting in other's threads and leaving constructive feedback is a good way to get people to comment in yours. Like I said good stuff, but I would love to see the robot finished.

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 4th, 2011 @ 06:15 AM

At 7/31/11 01:05 PM, rendibsivad wrote: Dis good line quality? :o Its an experiment.

It's better, but it's not clean yet. I'd personally use that as a sketch, set it at 30% opacity and draw new lines on top of it, then remove the old lines.
Below is what I'd consider okay line quality. I hardly ever do linedrawings, so my linequality isnt all that great either.

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 5th, 2011 @ 08:41 AM

what the hell is this?! (its your mom)

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 9th, 2011 @ 09:58 AM

I must be stupid to sumbit this. *facepalm*

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 9th, 2011 @ 10:00 AM

its another line quality test... My hand is lees shaky now.. I want to draw a bird now.


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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 13th, 2011 @ 09:00 AM

stupid organ. I dont need it.

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 13th, 2011 @ 10:27 AM

At 8/13/11 09:00 AM, rendibsivad wrote: stupid organ. I dont need it.

I don't even know what organ that's supposed to be..... the heart?
If you connected the two vein openings, you can make it a space hopper.

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 13th, 2011 @ 01:47 PM

At 8/9/11 09:58 AM, rendibsivad wrote: I must be stupid to sumbit this. *facepalm*

I think you should stop with the watercolor-esque coloring style and using something more solid, with darker line art. The line art that J-qb posted is what yours should look like all the time, solid black with no lines so thin they're hard to notice. Coloring line art might work with some styles, but i'd say solid black would work better for yours. So yeah,

- Make your line art darker & thicker.
- Use solid colors.
- And for gods sake, take more time with your stuff go back and get spots you missed while coloring, clean up any messy line art, and don't color outside the lines. Zoom in 600 percent if you have to, just make it neat.

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 13th, 2011 @ 02:32 PM

At 8/13/11 10:27 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote:
At 8/13/11 09:00 AM, rendibsivad wrote: stupid organ. I dont need it.
I don't even know what organ that's supposed to be..... the heart?
If you connected the two vein openings, you can make it a space hopper.

*facepalm* How did I even have the balls to post that? I myself dont even know what it is. A new type of organ? (yeah lets go with that..) It was a drawing I wanted an experiment with colors.

I will call the organ.... Beat o reily.


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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 13th, 2011 @ 03:38 PM

At 8/13/11 01:47 PM, DirtyMeatball wrote: I think you should stop with the watercolor-esque coloring style...

pfft... that's the only redeeming quality about any of his stuff. Not every style is suited for the thick black 'inked' lines look. He just needs to clean up and be consistent with the lines he has... spend more than 5 minutes on things... draw COMPLETE forms... and actually finish something ...instead of posting all these 'one little blob of content in the middle of a big white space with his initials in the corner' doodles (which is against the rules, btw).


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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 13th, 2011 @ 05:38 PM

At 8/13/11 03:38 PM, Nae wrote:
At 8/13/11 01:47 PM, DirtyMeatball wrote: I think you should stop with the watercolor-esque coloring style...
pfft... that's the only redeeming quality about any of his stuff.

Really? I knew you guys hated my stuff! *runs away and goes to join deviant art*


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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 13th, 2011 @ 07:47 PM

At 8/13/11 05:38 PM, rendibsivad wrote: Really? I knew you guys hated my stuff! *runs away and goes to join deviant art*

You already said that, kid. Your art needs work. Suck it up.

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Response to evil balloon's official art thread! Aug. 13th, 2011 @ 08:06 PM

At 8/13/11 05:38 PM, rendibsivad wrote: Really? I knew you guys hated my stuff! *runs away and goes to join deviant art*

Okay look it is not your Art that's bad. In all of your doodle things I see one or two things that are genuinely good be it the pose, the anatomy, shading etc. Thing that I, and I'm willing to bet a lot of the other people of this forum, find annoying is the fact that YOU DO NOT EVER COMPLETE ANYTHING! You've posted that drawing of "you" in a bunch of threads and it doesn't look complete, neither does anything else in your thread. Sit down and draw something. then color it in. then give it a background. then the people of the forum will actually want to see more from you.

Tl;DR FINISH A DRAWING MAN!