Newgrounds.com — Everything, By Everyone.

This is me playing a shitty game. Thats the face I make when theres a time limit, and awful controls.

At 7/28/11 02:22 PM, rendibsivad wrote: This is me playing a shitty game. Thats the face I make when theres a time limit, and awful controls.

oh thats the face I make when the time limit is up.

DANGNAMIT!!

At 7/28/11 02:48 PM, rendibsivad wrote: DANGNAMIT!!

looking good dude.

heres a warmup drawing of sometinhg..

a skecth for 15 minutes. WHY DO YOU GUYS IGNORE?!

Not trying to be rude, and you're certainly not bad, but there's something about your style that slightly annoys me. I think it's the way most of it looks really sketchy and quickly made. Take your time with your work. Your line art looks almost like you drew it at a low opacity for some reason, you should try doing in just with a solid black brush, I think it'd look less messy that way.
So basically do what other people are saying and refine these son'bitches so they look more solid and well done rather than sloppy and sketchy. Though you do appear to have improved some since the thread started.

Oh, and if you want people to post here more, do some bigger projects. You make a 15 minute sketch of a very simple character like you've been doing, people'll think "Thats neat", but if you do a bigass picture of something really awesome looking with really tiny details, people will have an urge to praise you. I find that on the art forum people often only post if they're really impressed or you're so bad they can't resist calling you on it.

This... this wip is a MASTERPIECE!! (why?) I think my lines are getting smoother and less wobbly and plus.. I think its detailed as well!

At 7/28/11 09:36 PM, rendibsivad wrote: This... this wip is a MASTERPIECE!! (why?) I think my lines are getting smoother and less wobbly and plus.. I think its detailed as well!

Looking awesome so far. I've concluded that the lack of detail in your previous work is probably what's annoying me. Most of what you've drawn are weird critters that don't wear clothes and have very basic anatomy, which there's nothing wrong with, but when it's almost all you draw it gets boring.

But yeah, this piece is looking great.

Not enough red and the computer wont let me color it anymore. fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

what the...

Dis good line quality? :o Its an experiment.

At 7/29/11 05:59 PM, rendibsivad wrote: what the...

Hell? HAY!! THATS NOT ME!! THATS AN IMPOSTER!!!

:cause he dont have no dick nose. :

mmm

I think I draw like egoraptor now... Do I?

How the hell did THIS get here?

OH MY GAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWDDDDDDDDD!!!

I think you jump around too much. Your stuff is not bad. I like most of it. Your line quality is improving but you seem to have no attention span for you pieces. It's either quick and dirty pics or pieces that time forgot. Also commenting in other's threads and leaving constructive feedback is a good way to get people to comment in yours. Like I said good stuff, but I would love to see the robot finished.

what the hell is this?! (its your mom)

I must be stupid to sumbit this. *facepalm*

its another line quality test... My hand is lees shaky now.. I want to draw a bird now.

stupid organ. I dont need it.

At 8/9/11 09:58 AM, rendibsivad wrote: I must be stupid to sumbit this. *facepalm*

I think you should stop with the watercolor-esque coloring style and using something more solid, with darker line art. The line art that J-qb posted is what yours should look like all the time, solid black with no lines so thin they're hard to notice. Coloring line art might work with some styles, but i'd say solid black would work better for yours. So yeah,

- Make your line art darker & thicker.
- Use solid colors.
- And for gods sake, take more time with your stuff go back and get spots you missed while coloring, clean up any messy line art, and don't color outside the lines. Zoom in 600 percent if you have to, just make it neat.

At 8/13/11 10:27 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 8/13/11 09:00 AM, rendibsivad wrote: stupid organ. I dont need it.

I don't even know what organ that's supposed to be..... the heart?
If you connected the two vein openings, you can make it a space hopper.

*facepalm* How did I even have the balls to post that? I myself dont even know what it is. A new type of organ? (yeah lets go with that..) It was a drawing I wanted an experiment with colors.

I will call the organ.... Beat o reily.

At 8/13/11 01:47 PM, DirtyMeatball wrote: I think you should stop with the watercolor-esque coloring style...

pfft... that's the only redeeming quality about any of his stuff. Not every style is suited for the thick black 'inked' lines look. He just needs to clean up and be consistent with the lines he has... spend more than 5 minutes on things... draw COMPLETE forms... and actually finish something ...instead of posting all these 'one little blob of content in the middle of a big white space with his initials in the corner' doodles (which is against the rules, btw).

At 8/13/11 03:38 PM, Nae wrote:

At 8/13/11 01:47 PM, DirtyMeatball wrote: I think you should stop with the watercolor-esque coloring style...

pfft... that's the only redeeming quality about any of his stuff.

Really? I knew you guys hated my stuff! *runs away and goes to join deviant art*

At 8/13/11 05:38 PM, rendibsivad wrote: Really? I knew you guys hated my stuff! *runs away and goes to join deviant art*

You already said that, kid. Your art needs work. Suck it up.