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Art Direction May. 25th, 2011 @ 11:45 PM Reply

I would like some feedback on the art direction for my new short I'm working on "Magnetic Death." It is a 3d animation, and yes, it is cell shaded.

"Magnetic Death" Test


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Response to Art Direction May. 26th, 2011 @ 10:14 AM Reply

ANYONE?


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Response to Art Direction May. 26th, 2011 @ 06:24 PM Reply

Thank you both for the kind words. I poured my heart and soul into this animation, and I'm glad at least a couple of people liked it.


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Response to Art Direction May. 26th, 2011 @ 06:30 PM Reply

Rly nice, would love to see more :D


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Response to Art Direction May. 28th, 2011 @ 03:19 AM Reply

looks nice so far, and I personally really like cell shading. The walk could use more fluidity though, as it looks very robotic right now. keep it up.

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Response to Art Direction May. 28th, 2011 @ 11:39 AM Reply

Thank you for the feedback, yea it is just a walk cycle, no emotion or personality right now but it is just a test. As long as you like the art style everythings cool


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Response to Art Direction May. 28th, 2011 @ 11:48 AM Reply

Alright well, since everyone's already given you an ego boost, I'll go ahead and be a dick ;o
It looks good, but it doesn't feel very.... dynamic.
The motion of the camera feels very linear and clunky, I don't know if it's what you're going for, but it feels kind of boring to me.


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Response to Art Direction May. 28th, 2011 @ 12:37 PM Reply

hahah. Thanks for the feedback dude, yea it's just a test, the first time I rendered out my character with the landscape. I just wanted to see how it looked overall, wasn't trying to be too dramatic with the camera movements.


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