How is?

[TouchEverything]

How is my style to far?
It's for a series I will do near in the future.

So here it is...
(FORGET ABOUT THE COLOR ATM)
C+C
Should I go for thinner lines
Body shape.

His name is 7even(Just seven)
He has 2 friends, 6ix and Kidd

How is it so far?
There will be no storyline much.
Its kind of gonna be like Dexter's laboratory, adventure time ect.

[TouchEverything]

Tell me what to fix or just fix it your self, or even I could try a different style.

[Aigis]

At 5/16/11 01:57 AM, TouchEverything wrote: His name is 7even(Just seven)

Not Se7en?

[TouchEverything]

Here are some(Just a few) mouth pieces, and some color(there will be no shading(at least most of it)
and the main cast 6ix(Right) and 7even(Left)

[TouchEverything]

Hmm, maybe... I'm not sure yet.

Here is the pic.

[TransformersMarvel]

Looks good. Maybe a little shading here or there depending on your art style. Maybe twisting his lower legs, I mean wheels to match his position.

[test-object]

Please don't use numbers in names. It's not cool and too often ridiculous. Just pronounce them with the numbers intact and you will see. I mean, Screfourm was a horrible name and so was Sesevenen.

[TouchEverything]

At 5/16/11 07:32 AM, test-object wrote: Please don't use numbers in names. It's not cool and too often ridiculous. Just pronounce them with the numbers intact and you will see. I mean, Screfourm was a horrible name and so was Sesevenen.

I'm not really going for cool, and this will be solved none the less, but I'm hoping come help me with my art, not my names, nothing is settled, I'm hoping just to fix my characters.

due to my style I will not shade it heavily but just a bit of tics and tacs here and there.

[TouchEverything]

It might just be 6 or six.

[Kashi]

At 5/16/11 04:41 PM, TouchEverything wrote: It might just be 6 or six.

I think Kidd should be renamed 4our.

[TouchEverything]

At 5/16/11 04:57 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote:

At 5/16/11 04:41 PM, TouchEverything wrote: It might just be 6 or six.

I think Kidd should be renamed 4our.

1 through 5 are rejects by Dr.B who is creator of 6 and 7 and Kidd is there neighbor pretends he is a robot and thinks that 6 and 7 are kids like him in robot costumes, as 6 and 7 think Kidd is also a robot.

Here is a Kidd sketch.

[TouchEverything]

Also my lines are 1.3 thick.

[Kashi]

At 5/16/11 05:02 PM, TouchEverything wrote: 1 through 5 are rejects by Dr.B who is creator of 6 and 7 and Kidd is there neighbor pretends he is a robot and thinks that 6 and 7 are kids like him in robot costumes, as 6 and 7 think Kidd is also a robot.

Cool, backstory.
You should vary your lineweight; it makes stuff have more depth. Although, the single lineweight kinda works with your style. I would just advise the outlines of the characters to be thicker than the rest. Gives it a cool cartoony feel, imo.
The concept of what you are trying to put across is nice, but (like in the first picture) it can be cleaned up.
I also think 6ix has a terrible color scheme.

[TouchEverything]

At 5/16/11 05:23 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote:

At 5/16/11 05:02 PM, TouchEverything wrote: 1 through 5 are rejects by Dr.B who is creator of 6 and 7 and Kidd is there neighbor pretends he is a robot and thinks that 6 and 7 are kids like him in robot costumes, as 6 and 7 think Kidd is also a robot.

I also think 6ix has a terrible color scheme.

And with my line what should it be at?
Yeah, I'm having troubles with 6, do you think you play with the colors?

[brettamatowski]

It shouldn't matter what your thickness of line is. There is no exact thickness a line should even be. A style is a style. You don't claim what your style is; it's something that you earn, not something that you practice.

There's a thing called progression, where stylistic characteristics are truly born. When you grow through art, and you'll probably notice throughout the years, that your "style" changes A LOT. I sure have noticed through my experience.

SO, what I'm trying to say is that you shouldn't be asking us to suggest changes to your own art. A simple critique will suffice, not asking, "Hmm I made my line .235878372 thick, what should it really be at?" Doesn't matter! You choose what you want to do with it.

[TouchEverything]

I'm saying does it fit with the rest, I think it looks alright, but if some people says other wise, I try to fix it to make other people liking.

[brettamatowski]

Disregard what I said since you didn't understand it.

[TouchEverything]

At 5/16/11 07:08 PM, brettamatowski wrote: Disregard what I said since you didn't understand it.

Out of note, LOLZ you have 111 posts.

But alright.

[Kashi]

At 5/16/11 05:48 PM, TouchEverything wrote: Yeah, I'm having troubles with 6, do you think you play with the colors?

I can't believe I actually did.
Anyways, I just suggest some more muted colors; never use anything too saturated, it just hurts the eyes.
I wanted to keep with the general scheme you have there, and I couldn't resist shading. Practice for me as well. I learned a bit.

[TouchEverything]

Wow, looks pretty good, I think I'll adopte some colors or just play with them.

[TouchEverything]

Sketch(Human)
Last but not least, my personal favorite, Dave(Kidd's dad)

Hes is sad. :(