At 9/22/11 06:06 PM, CrazyRock wrote:
Ah fuck,it won't upload to here or to the portal,so i have to give you a link to NG Dump...
Its kind of hard for me to judge roundness at the moment since my screen ratio is messed up at the moment. But here goes.
One of the things that I am notincing is that the circle is a bit sketchy. I really think it could be more impacting if the line work was much more smooth.
Try To either steady your hand or use some tools to aid you. Either a large compass or a coffee can or something, depending on the size. Work on making long accurate strokes to sometimes help with the smoothness.
As for the design, its not bad. I do like it. You should work on the center curve a little more, get some more of a bend to it to really get that curved tear drop feel.
Also, You should blend on the color of your fire a little, even consider adding blue tips since it think it would fit the design very well.
The little circles coming of the sides are alright, but you need to keep symmetrical, The one on the right is starting to bend where the one on the left is straight.
as for the little vines coming off of it I think they are fine.
You just need to finish it up now.