Well, lets get crackin'. Long story short, I need your peeps input on an upcoming story I'm thinking about writing! So, I wrote two v.'s of the prologue to give you guys a better idea about the story. I'm not going to write it if you peeps aren't interested. So please give feedback!
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Cast out of their world and into a total wasteland
The Hero, fighting for what's right.
The Slave, finding a place for himself.
And the Tyrant, confused and dangerous.
All with the same ambition, to gain control of the land of Mulgarath.
Here is their story, here is there mission.
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"Yessss, the item of power. We shall use this to tip the scales and seize the land of Mulgarath for myself!" Hissed the Choas lord, frightening his demon-minions with his madness.
"But... m-my lord. Your Chaos is already at an all-time high from the power of the gods. If we shall get this item of power... it will amplify your Chaos to an unstable level and-..."
"You fool!" the lord screamed, cutting off his demon minion and sending him flying across the dark room with Chaos. "Don't you see? We must have this to defeat the Chaos monster! There is no other way!"
After cooling down, he addressed his general, and said, "Send a scout to search for the item of power."
"Yes, M' Lord." the general pointed a finger towards a stout demon with a rather large hunchback, and he scuttled off out the makeshift wood doors.
"Yesss. Nothing shall stand in my way, nothing!"
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I know it's a bit cheesy and confusing. But please give feedback!