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My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 05:07:24 Reply

I will be posting my comic book, "Forever Alone" here. It is about two girls, Kate-chan and Courtney-chan. They like each other a lot. (well at least Courtney-chan does). Right now, they are both in High School. Kate-chan is very annoyed because Courtney-chan is always clinging to her.

First, I would like to apologize for all the random crap in here. I want it to be published someday. (DERP!) I hate to do it too - but I am planning to publish it and be an awesome mangaka ololololol. Especially on the damn cover, I really wanna say sorry for it.

The cover.

I'm serious about this.

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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 05:14:19 Reply

Page one.

We see Courtney-chan and Kate-chan chatting.

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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 05:29:27 Reply

I like it but you're not really gonna keep that 'chan' and various other formalities stuff going are you?

I understand if it's out of reverence for the manga style and whatever but honestly I think it would benefit if you just anglicized the language fully if you get my meaning.

You might alienate some people with all that 'chan, sama, kun' business. Just a thought.

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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 05:39:16 Reply

You stole my idea. I made a comic about two girls named Kate and Courtney.


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 05:51:09 Reply

At 4/23/11 05:39 AM, GameMasterShania wrote: You stole my idea. I made a comic about two girls named Kate and Courtney.

First of all, these are clearly different characters.

While your characters are Kate and Courtney, his characters are Kate-chan and Courtney-chan.

Secondly, while your character are ten years old, these characters are clearly of an age where sexual confusion is a potential issue, and one where it's not particularly creepy to be writing an awkward lesbian fantasy about them (unless you're, like, an adult).

In unrelated news, I'm thinking of writing a comic book (which I plan to publish) about two sexually confused schoolgirls called Cate and Courtenay. Good idea?


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 06:02:10 Reply

At 4/23/11 05:39 AM, GameMasterShania wrote: You stole my idea. I made a comic about two girls named Kate and Courtney.

Herp, dya think? No you didn't. You made MS Paint shit droppings of which half the 'pages' (and I use that term lightly) were filled with ugly unauthorized copyright disclaimers. This is what an actual comic looks like and it's intentionally hilarious.

Besides, this is Fifty-50's thread and it's not about you. Let's talk about him.
I say Fifty-50 is awesome.


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 08:23:40 Reply

At 4/23/11 06:02 AM, test-object wrote: I say Fifty-50 is awesome.

I say, what you say is true.


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 09:46:37 Reply

At 4/23/11 08:25 AM, Larkatosa wrote: Lets become his creepy fangirls!! :D
Oh mai gaawd! U Ffty ar sooo asym!!

Wel I liked 50 way B4 he was kool!!!11 GO FITTY!!!!11111one one


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 10:06:41 Reply

Thanks guys! Especially you Aigis. For explaining the differences. The only similarity here are the names. I'm not gonna make any girls kick a cop's ass and neither of them are catholic. Well I'm here to show you a warm up before I start page 3. lol

I'm redoing the cover. It's not enough as it seems. Maybe something more lulzy.

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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 10:08:41 Reply

At 4/23/11 05:14 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Page one.

We see Courtney-chan and Kate-chan chatting.

Looks like it'll be interesting to read. Is there an ETC (estimated time of completion) for page 2, or are you just going to post pages at your disgression?


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 10:12:33 Reply

At 4/23/11 10:08 AM, XWarrior61 wrote: Looks like it'll be interesting to read. Is there an ETC (estimated time of completion) for page 2, or are you just going to post pages at your disgression?

Yeah. It will up maybe tomorrow or something. I haven't thought of anything funny happening yet.


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 10:32:40 Reply

Hey Fifty. When is going to begin the hawt lesbian action? I can't wait!!!!!!! (and it's not gonna be creepy, because they're not 10 years old......)


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 10:33:31 Reply

i love how i can still tell it's your art even though it's a different style; thats some skill right there!
the artwork is so cool! but i think calling them ___chan sounds a bit forced as though you're trying too hard or something; doesn't come across so good


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 10:40:04 Reply

At 4/23/11 10:33 AM, Batto wrote: i love how i can still tell it's your art even though it's a different style; thats some skill right there!
the artwork is so cool! but i think calling them ___chan sounds a bit forced as though you're trying too hard or something; doesn't come across so good

I used chan to evade copyright claims. And thank you! It's very appreciated. Although the cover looks awkward.

At 4/23/11 10:32 AM, creepyboy wrote: Hey Fifty. When is going to begin the hawt lesbian action? I can't wait!!!!!!! (and it's not gonna be creepy, because they're not 10 years old......)

Soon friend. Very soon.


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 11:37:02 Reply

At 4/23/11 10:40 AM, Fifty-50 wrote:
At 4/23/11 10:33 AM, Batto wrote: i love how i can still tell it's your art even though it's a different style; thats some skill right there!
the artwork is so cool! but i think calling them ___chan sounds a bit forced as though you're trying too hard or something; doesn't come across so good
I used chan to evade copyright claims. And thank you! It's very appreciated. Although the cover looks awkward.

haha, thats some obscure copyrighting!
maybe try splitting the cover down the middle, with the girl thats gonna be alone looking all sad, and the other just minding her business, if thats appropriate to the plot of course : )


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 11:42:29 Reply

I now know this is a parody of my comic,you said so yourself.

I commented on that page. Thanks for the *cough* fanart, *cough* Fifty.


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 11:52:45 Reply

Fifty..... You. Are. Awesome.

I cry tears of joy for this.

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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 12:30:20 Reply

Looks nothing like that other lesbian comic


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 12:53:46 Reply

At 4/23/11 11:42 AM, GameMasterShania wrote: I commented on that page. Thanks for the *cough* fanart, *cough* Fifty.

Parodies are completely legal with regards to copyright claims.

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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 12:56:36 Reply

At 4/23/11 12:53 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:
At 4/23/11 11:42 AM, GameMasterShania wrote: I commented on that page. Thanks for the *cough* fanart, *cough* Fifty.
Parodies are completely legal with regards to copyright claims.

I'm HAPPY I get fanart.


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 13:30:53 Reply

For the record, guys:
chan - an endearing title after a female's name (teenage, baby, child), or anything so uncontrollably cute (KAWAII DESU!!!)
kun - when a female uses it, an endearing title after a male's name (teenage, baby, child), or by someone older referring to anyoneyounger or of lower rank, or just a title for a guy (esp. when used by other guys, unless, well, they are like Kate-chan and Courtney-chan)
sama - a title used for someone whom you show greatrespect, or someone older. Also stuff like customers or recipients of mail and whatnot.
San, senpai, shi, and more.

I had also looked this up a while ago, and is why Zane calls me all of those silly names.
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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 13:35:36 Reply

oh boy a manga about lesbian schoolgirls that's never been done before ever I would totally pay money for that and not ignore it even as a free torrent

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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 13:49:33 Reply

When will pre-orders be available and how much more for a signed copy.

At 4/23/11 05:07 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: I will be posting my comic book, "Forever Alone" here..
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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 14:01:56 Reply

Oh Fifty, how I love you and your ability to spontaneously create amazing quality comics with inspiration from an MS paint comic with awkward lesbian lizard people.

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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 14:09:18 Reply

This is too epic for words.


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 14:15:17 Reply

At 4/23/11 01:35 PM, EnactJudo wrote: oh boy a manga about lesbian schoolgirls that's never been done before ever I would totally pay money for that and not ignore it even as a free torrent

lol at not getting the joke or reading the thread :3


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 14:38:05 Reply

You = God.


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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 15:22:58 Reply

Well c'mon man! I need more of this unfiltered unadulterated hot lesbian action! I love the original story you've come up with for this. Very clever, I think.

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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 16:51:42 Reply

At 4/23/11 02:15 PM, test-object wrote: lol at not getting the joke or reading the thread :3

ok I read the thread. Maybe if he's lucky I'll DL it if it's freeleech and forget about it on my external drive

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Response to My Comic Book (no It's A Manga) 2011-04-23 19:22:32 Reply

Unfortunately for you all, Fifty is too young to draw actual hot lesbian sex.