The Enchanted Cave 2
Delve into a strange cave with a seemingly endless supply of treasure, strategically choos
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COMPLETE edition of the interactive "choose next panel" comic
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Yes, I like it, but i think you should do the glow even stronger ;). Good job!
At 4/19/11 12:31 PM, ChameneonNinjar wrote: Yes, I like it, but i think you should do the glow even stronger ;). Good job!
I agree with you on that. Anyway this one is not finished yet...i want to add some details ;)
Thanks for your critic!!!
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Burn Tool/Smudge Tool = BAD
Don't use it. Use more solid strokes.
Stop making new threads for every image you make.
Also, the smudging looks terrible.
Well now??? Is this a better version of it?
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At 4/19/11 04:31 PM, armag3d0n wrote: Well now??? Is this a better version of it?
Ummmm. No. It seems blurrier than the first and lacks a serious amount of depth by having none at all. Sooooo, just look up some tutorials and whatnot via the interweb.
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Better? No. Blurrier? Also no.
Try drawing an actual base first, before beginning with shapes. Use circles, lines,... to come to a physical character, even if it is just smoke. I'm guessing you are using a mouse, so this would probably be very hard for you to do. If you have a scanner of camera, draw something with pencil and show that to us.
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I agree with the above poster: If you don't have a tablet and are trying to do digital work with a mouse you are going to see that you won't get too far (at all....) so stick with trying to get your ideas on paper first, then invest in a tablet! :D :D
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Thanks for your advice everyone but here is a new drawing i made..have a look???
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Oh and this is hand drawn..but quality i know but..i think its ok...
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For what I can see, it's pretty good. The feet are probably a bit off, but I like the shrugging motion. If you can get to scan your pictures, it'd be very helpful, though. It's kind of hard to give proper critisism when you have to squint to look at a picture properly.
At 4/20/11 06:31 AM, Zyphonee wrote: For what I can see, it's pretty good. The feet are probably a bit off, but I like the shrugging motion. If you can get to scan your pictures, it'd be very helpful, though. It's kind of hard to give proper critisism when you have to squint to look at a picture properly.
I know and i feel bad for that...i didnt have a scanner yet but im gonna buy one soon enough...;)
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oh and just in case the knight i posted isnt enough...
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At 4/20/11 06:56 AM, armag3d0n wrote: oh and just in case the knight i posted isnt enough...
Wow, that's good! Your pen work does you a lot more justice than the computer stuff.
If you want to have a go at painting on the computer, it might be worthwhile drawing on some plain paper, taking a photo then painting underneath the pen outlines.
Love to see some more of your pen drawings, anyway.
At 4/20/11 07:51 AM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote:At 4/20/11 06:56 AM, armag3d0n wrote: oh and just in case the knight i posted isnt enough...Wow, that's good! Your pen work does you a lot more justice than the computer stuff.
If you want to have a go at painting on the computer, it might be worthwhile drawing on some plain paper, taking a photo then painting underneath the pen outlines.
Love to see some more of your pen drawings, anyway.
Thank you very much my friend!!! You just made me very happy!!! I promise i will post more pen drawings soon!!! :D
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Theeeere you go. Much, much better. As Turkey said, try tracing these drawings on your pc in some pretty, non-blurred colours. I like where this is going ^^
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At 4/20/11 08:33 AM, test-object wrote: Theeeere you go. Much, much better. As Turkey said, try tracing these drawings on your pc in some pretty, non-blurred colours. I like where this is going ^^
Thanks!!! As i said i will post more pen drawings soon!!! Thank you veery much again!!!
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Definitely Stick with the pen works (but I also recommend trying to do some better shading if you have to add in pencil in there just to give your pieces more depth)
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At 4/20/11 07:52 PM, silversunned wrote: Definitely Stick with the pen works
Great work with pencils, but I'll think you can improove on the computer too! I like both!
At 4/21/11 05:33 AM, ChameneonNinjar wrote: improove
Lol you spell strange. "Improove"
I think you meant "improve" without the double "o".
At 4/20/11 07:52 PM, silversunned wrote: Definitely Stick with the pen works (but I also recommend trying to do some better shading if you have to add in pencil in there just to give your pieces more depth)
Yeah i usually add some kind of shading in my pen drawings but i can't find a proper shading style that suits me if you now what i mean...
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At 4/21/11 05:33 AM, ChameneonNinjar wrote:At 4/20/11 07:52 PM, silversunned wrote: Definitely Stick with the pen worksGreat work with pencils, but I'll think you can improove on the computer too! I like both!
Thanks...i'll do my best!
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Guys im consderon to begin a comic..im not sure though...i've drawn this guuy wich i believe i will use as one of the viliains .The comic will be in the time of magic, knights and dragons...but tell me what ya think allright???
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At 4/25/11 01:37 PM, armag3d0n wrote: Sorry i meant considering xD
Its pretty good, but realize that, in a comic, you will have to draw your characters over and over again in every frame, and that could be very time consuming. Simplifying the characters will really save you a lot of time and effort. It will also help so that all of the details won't be so distracting from the main focus of each panel.
I also made this...uuh....thing. I'll name it scorpion-turtle-spider-thing... ;)
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LOLS at the turtle scorpion! I like! :D :D
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