The Enchanted Cave 2
Delve into a strange cave with a seemingly endless supply of treasure, strategically choos
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COMPLETE edition of the interactive "choose next panel" comic
4.09 / 5.00 12,195 ViewsHey, I just started here on Newgrounds (as a user, I been playing games and watching flash's for ages) hoping to get some submissions up, I'm currently messing about with Flash animating (to no avail :( ) but I spend a lot of time drawing with and without my Graphics tablet. So here I am hoping to get some feedback and opinions about my artwork.
Cheers!
I did this one a some point last year on some old software I don't use now called "Twisted Brush" the brush was kind of klunky (if that makes sense to you guys) but this is one of my favorite pieces that I did with the software.
Feel free to comment, ask questions and leave constructive criticism, it would be greatly appreceated.
Shading doesn't make sense. There's light coming from like 5 directions.
At 4/13/11 04:53 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Shading doesn't make sense. There's light coming from like 5 directions.
I think those things on the sides of the radio towers are supposed to be searchlights, so I imagine there's light coming from all over the place.
very cool, very hip ..i do not approve of that green text though
At 4/13/11 05:06 PM, Aigis wrote:At 4/13/11 04:53 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Shading doesn't make sense. There's light coming from like 5 directions.I think those things on the sides of the radio towers are supposed to be searchlights, so I imagine there's light coming from all over the place.
I would agree with that, though it still doesn't look right in that there is a highlight at the back part of his shoulder, and on the back of his lower arm, but not from shoulder to elbow. Shoulder to elbow should be highlighted if those other parts are as well.
At 4/13/11 05:07 PM, SocialFailure wrote: very cool, very hip ..i do not approve of that green text though
Thanks,
I should explain, when I did this I thought it would be "cool" to make it like a single cover for the song I was inspired by ("Nothing You Lose" by Nightmare) If I'm being honest I used to try and do the whole song name thing quite a lot but I gave up on that a while back, I'm not so hot on it myself now but I didn't want to edit the picture before showing it.
As for the lighting on the arm, I see what you mean with it not making sense how it's on the shoulder and the lower arm but not in between but I didn't want to make the arms too chunky or overkill the orange/yellow lighting, I did add the searchlights in as a reason why though glad one of you noticed that.