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It was supposed to be laisse avoir...

http://fr.wordrefere..r=let+have&dict=

I made spelling mistake...

For steamy... http://fr.wordrefere..nfr=steamy&dict=

At 11/25/05 05:15 PM, Quisty wrote: It was supposed to be laisse avoir...

Still "Let Have" is not "let us have" which is equivalent to "Let's have" which would be Avons... the context you use it it in is "to let have"... which may only be slightly different, but makes a large impact in my mind... then again, my french is quite rusty... I havnt been fluent in two years.

For steamy... http://fr.wordrefere..nfr=steamy&dict=

Then you would have to use erotique...

I am not sure really, I am just calling upon what I know. And what I know best is that you cannot directly translate french to english. Notice my "chaude" goes after "sexe"... et cetera...

You could very well be right... I just wouldnt use a translator to figure it out, because direct translation screws up verbs and the appropriate adverbs et cetera.

Though this conversation has wanted mne to take french back up... : )

More poetry:

Vocation: Writer

the fireplace of my abode
and the turning of the flames
bring the heat for tomorrow
like the powder of tonight

the leisure of my divan
and rejection of my peripheral
bring discovery for my centre
like the passing of fantasy

the molding of my hand
and the birth of the vision
bring a lifetime of fulfillment
like the conception of Christ

but I Just want to write.

Even After (the periods would be spaces)

If ever I am needed . . . . . to tend to the sick
revenge the defeated . . . . . in sickness or death
pray by a bedside . . . . . return mid-pith
request for a favor . . . . . find the bright light
stop the rain and tide . . . . . kiss a forehead
consider the plight . . . . . change an outcome
catch all the sadness . . . . . plague the wicked
or exist by your side . . . . . my spirit will arrive
in templar pace haste . . . . . to be by your side.

Drive Away

“What can I get you, sir?” the lady asks.
The man faces her, eyeing waist to brow
“Tea to start. I am awaiting company.”
She nods and strides to the back,
But as she steps behind the door
Her gaze grasps his appearance also.
His short, dark hair is perfectly trimmed,
His face smoothly shaven,
His suit a stark black, and his white shirt clean.
His deep green eyes look up at her,
She quickly closes the restricted door.

Our well-kept man grabs his leather briefcase.
Placing it on the busy table with a peek inside,
He glances towards the men’s washroom.
He leaves the briefcase on his seat,
And walks towards the marked door.
He opens the entry slightly,
Presses his face against the wooden grain,
And takes a peek inside.
The reflection in the mirrors says no one is there.
The young waitress walks out from the back,
And he grabs her, bringing her into the washroom.

He locks the door and lifts her onto the counter.
His lips meet her neck.
His hands slide up her waist under her shirt.
The shirt hits the floor.
She kisses him harder - their tongues collide.
His soft lips run over her collarbone and shoulder.
Her hand runs over his pants.
She moans and pants. Her bare back against the wall.
Her legs wrapped around him. She wants more.
Through the hallway and out onto the floor
The briefcase has disappeared.

A blonde haired woman crosses the street,
And jumps into her sports car.
The package is on the leather passenger seat.
She drives towards the lights.
Of all nights, this is the one she chose.
She fixates her sunglasses,
And she stops on signal, “fuck.”
Through her rear view, the van breaks.
A masked man gets out of the side door.
He walks towards the car. The female is startled.
His finger suggests, and she hands him the parcel.

Rubber on tar, the scream calls,
And in the back seat, the briefcase is opened.
Six eyes watch the black mask of the man
Dazzle in lights of many colours.
The briefcase is closed, “identified.”
“Good. Four more blocks,” the driver answers.
He grabs his cell phone from his jacket pocket,
And dials the number from his memory.
“We have it. Delivery is on schedule.”
A dark, rusty voice is heard, and considered.
Four blocks pass.

The van pulls up into the parking space.
The thief gets out, package in hand.
Though the commercial building says Closed,
The door opens, and new hands take on the task.
The male, in his workplace, sits beside his subordinate
And then he asks, “What time is the courier coming?”
“Few minutes,” is the quick reply. The fat man scrambles.
A honk is heard as bright lights impede on the glass.
The door opens, and the parcel is grabbed off the floor.
It is placed beside the driver in the front, not the back.
Another drive at night. Another delivery.

The woman moans our fine character’s name.
A cry for the lust he provides.
The cell phone rings. In time, she answers.
The words of the dialer cannot be heard.
“Thanks. I appreciate the call,” she finishes,
“I have to get back to work,” she looks at him.
He smiles. They kiss. He leaves the washroom.
He sits down at his table. She brings his tea.
He enjoys his meal and leaves with a number.
Almost forgetting his briefcase, he turns back.
Picking it up, he travels to his car. He drives away.

Somewhere in the city a cell phone is hung up.
The officer looks at his watch, and turns on the news.
Reporters cage the country’s leader.
He speaks his mind, and says what is best for his people.
The reporters outbid for attention.
The officer’s child sits on his lap.
His darling wife is in the kitchen.
His daughter, finally home from work, enters the home.
His phone vibrates. He looks at his watch once more.
“The country, no, the world, stands at attention.”
Silence heads. People stop. Cars glide.

At 11/25/05 10:17 AM, DaSadGirl wrote: I just don't like getting pricked in the finger. It hurts more than a shot.

Word. Waited 2 hours in line to donate blood last fall. They pricked my finger twice, then refused my blood because my red blood cell count wasn't high enough (but I'm not anemic either). They don't want my blood? THEN THEY'LL NEVER HAVE IT!

In terms of the French translation of "hot steamy sex", I think you need a Quebecor to sort this out. Your translations were hilarious, but I think the expression simply doesn't work in French. I'm sure there's a phrase SOMETHING like that, but I'm more anglophone than francophone. Hot is NOT the same thing as chaud (in this context). Embuer means myst (which is CLOSE to steamy...I guess). Steam = vapeur, but it can't be used as an adjective in this sense. I do think it's the verb "avoir" though, but in the subjonctif tense. This was the best I could come up with:

"Faisons monter la température de la pièce avec du sex érotique ."

You should ask the Quebec club though....if it's REALLY that important.

At 11/25/05 06:08 PM, DancingTurkeyGod wrote: In terms of the French translation of "hot steamy sex", I think you need a Quebecor to sort this out. Your translations were hilarious, but I think the expression simply doesn't work in French. I'm sure there's a phrase SOMETHING like that, but I'm more anglophone than francophone. Hot is NOT the same thing as chaud (in this context). Embuer means myst (which is CLOSE to steamy...I guess). Steam = vapeur, but it can't be used as an adjective in this sense. I do think it's the verb "avoir" though, but in the subjonctif tense. This was the best I could come up with:

Like I said to ~X~ It's slang to French and I have never seen it used before. I tried my best to make something up. Maybe you could ask my Quebec neighbors for us?

At 11/25/05 06:08 PM, DancingTurkeyGod wrote: "Faisons monter la température de la pièce avec du sex érotique ."

hmmm.... the second half makes sense, but the first is throwing me off...

it isnt to rise the tempertaure with sex... which may be the literal case, but not the way to say it. Unless you're very taditional haha...

and ya, I figured steam would not work i nthe context, thus my first attempt a translation didnt have it.

and whats funny... is my father spent his childhood in Montreal... which makes him a partial quebecer... and me one... = )

like... lets raise the temperature of the room while having sex... or something... I cant figure out what yours precisely said... its bugg me...

though, I have come up with a solution...

We could just say "Lets have excellent sex" ... that would save a lot of work.

At 11/25/05 06:16 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: it isnt to rise the tempertaure with sex... which may be the literal case, but not the way to say it. Unless you're very taditional haha...

I know. That part was more of a joke...
C'mon, who is gonna take that sentence seriously?

and whats funny... is my father spent his childhood in Montreal... which makes him a partial quebecer... and me one... = )

Wow, you're one of the few Canadians that is proud of that. Have you been to Montreal before?

Oh, and just because you grew up in Montreal it doesn't mean you know French. I have a few friends like that...They stayed in the West Island and now can't uphold any conversation in French (nor really understand when I speak to them in that language).

At 11/25/05 06:23 PM, DancingTurkeyGod wrote: Wow, you're one of the few Canadians that is proud of that. Have you been to Montreal before?

Yes. I went to Qeubec City too!

Oh, and just because you grew up in Montreal it doesn't mean you know French. I have a few friends like that...They stayed in the West Island and now can't uphold any conversation in French (nor really understand when I speak to them in that language).

I didn't grow up there. I was in French-Imerssion until grade 6. Then I started to learn English in grade 7. Hence, my horrible grammer and spelling problems ^_^

At 11/25/05 06:20 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: like... lets raise the temperature of the room while having sex... or something... I cant figure out what yours precisely said... its bugg me...

I basically said: "Let's heat up the room with erotic sex." But it was in a really, really corny way.

I truly believe this translation is a lost cause, haha

At 11/25/05 06:25 PM, Quisty wrote: I didn't grow up there. I was in French-Imerssion until grade 6. Then I started to learn English in grade 7. Hence, my horrible grammer and spelling problems ^_^

That's not bad....The only problem is that you probably weren't practicing your French all this time, so you lost a lot of it. French grammar and spelling is a bitch. Most pure Francophone Quebecors can't even get it right. They end up writing the way they speak, with all their slang words.

the portal has been soo busy today,well lets look at the holidays like this our next holiday is christmas and ya know on christmas you get good food and alot of presents.

i would just like to ask what all yall want for x-mas,for me i want a new laptop,a new dog and thats pretty much it o ya and some ps2 games.

At 11/25/05 06:48 PM, CrimsonRocker wrote: the portal has been soo busy today,well lets look at the holidays like this our next holiday is christmas and ya know on christmas you get good food and alot of presents.

I know, those glock flashes. Thank god my sister's not on the internet at the moment since there's a shit load of B/P to try and grab. This'll get me closer to Elite Guard Brigadier General.

i would just like to ask what all yall want for x-mas,for me i want a new laptop,a new dog and thats pretty much it o ya and some ps2 games.

My main wants for christmas are a new TV and an MP3 player. The rest I will ask for games (most wanted is Mario Kart DS) and music (most wanted is SOAD - Hypnotize).

Well, christmas is a month away, but before that, there are things like end of school term and school cinema trip to see the new Harry Potter movie. Newgrounds stuff, well, there's level 13 and 10000 posts, LOL. So yeah, December should definately be a kick ass month.

At 11/25/05 06:23 PM, DancingTurkeyGod wrote: I know. That part was more of a joke...
C'mon, who is gonna take that sentence seriously?

ahah gotcha...

Wow, you're one of the few Canadians that is proud of that. Have you been to Montreal before?

Yes, I have. I like it. Though, I love quebec city.

Oh, and just because you grew up in Montreal it doesn't mean you know French. I have a few friends like that...They stayed in the West Island and now can't uphold any conversation in French (nor really understand when I speak to them in that language).

I never said I knew french. I said several times that I havnt been fluent for years... the only reason I brought it up was because you said to ask a quebecer... which my father is, in a sense.

At 11/25/05 06:30 PM, DancingTurkeyGod wrote: I basically said: "Let's heat up the room with erotic sex." But it was in a really, really corny way.

ya, that is what I got from it.

I truly believe this translation is a lost cause, haha

haha, ya...

Whaaa

More french and another poem by Myst_Williams...

You people been busy :)

~X~

At 11/25/05 09:00 PM, XwaynecoltX wrote: You people been busy :)

Yup... I'm trying to clean out my PC right now and I'm taking care of my sister. I hope to buy the new Norton Security soon.

Can I join this place cause i write some good poems now and then :)))

At 11/25/05 10:59 PM, DaSadGirl wrote: Why won't you post with your regular account, silly rabbit? Welcome aboard.......I guess. :D

Ha thats what i was thinking...

Oh well its always fun to see peoples alts...

~X~

what is an alt? My chick friend gave this to me and someone else said to use this cool name :)))

:(

My moms work was on the news. A pipe blew up there... They shut down the emergancy room... I bet she is having a hard time... :(

At 11/25/05 11:03 PM, Lovekills wrote: what is an alt? My chick friend gave this to me and someone else said to use this cool name :)))

OH lord...

Sounds funny to me, but whatever the case feel free to write a story ot two maybe a poem, and maybe about your insomnia woes...

~X~

At 11/25/05 11:22 PM, DaSadGirl wrote: Yep, you can always read their earlier posts to see who they are. :D

Thats what i do if its a tough one to crack...

I was thinking this was ~X~ when I first seen the name, since that was his old alias.

Nah i got rid of that names ages ago...

At 11/25/05 11:15 PM, Quisty wrote: My moms work was on the news. A pipe blew up there... They shut down the emergancy room... I bet she is having a hard time... :(

Is she still alive...

Heh anyways im sure she will be ok stuff happens ya know...

~X~

At 11/25/05 11:25 PM, XwaynecoltX wrote: Is she still alive...

Heh anyways im sure she will be ok stuff happens ya know...

She is ok. I called her work in Detroit. She said they have all the patients from where the pipe blew on her floor now, so it's a bit more busy there. She works with lungs. I don't know the fancy word for that part of your body, but that is her floor. She is a nurse working her way up in her job. A water pipe blew, but she is ok- THANK GOD!!!

Could you imagine if it went the bad way...

Like massive carnage on the floor with pipes sticking out of heads and stuff, sorta like a flash on newgrounds...

Well im glad everyone os ok,...

~X~

At 11/25/05 11:40 PM, DaSadGirl wrote: Oh, and I own your ass ~X~! :-P

I OWNED his ass too ^_^ Man that was fun, hehe.

No, ~X~ is ok. He is just making jokes. He is like that. His role model is a dark comic, so what can I do?

At 11/25/05 11:40 PM, DaSadGirl wrote: Stop trying to give Quisty bad thoughts! You are like, her....torturer! :-P

I am? i was just thinking of some flash ideas... :(

Oh, and I own your ass ~X~! :-P

Ouch that doesnt seem right for some reason and how did i only get 777 points i did get pwned haha...

~X~

lol like the video i guess.whats been goin on here today i havent had much time to post here today as you can see last night i had 300 post and i only have like 315 know normally i post like 20 posts a day well at least i trie to post a lot a day,but ne ways i was just gonna see whats been goin on.

what have we been talking about today?

At 11/25/05 11:58 PM, DaSadGirl wrote: Well, because "Quisty" really isn't an original name unlike my name or your name, I think. I'm pretty sure there are plenty of other Quisty's around the internet or people mentioning the word, "Quisty." Isn't that a character from some RPG?

About 3 of us. One from Ireland, one from Finland and me. I'll try my own name

http://googlefight.c..mp;word2=xwaynecoltx

Haha he won

I replied to your mail ~X~ :P

At 11/26/05 12:02 AM, Quisty wrote: About 3 of us. One from Ireland, one from Finland and me. I'll try my own name

Nah i see the name quisty all the time its like very common among final fantasy fans sometimes i see it too much ha...

~X~

At 11/25/05 09:02 PM, Quisty wrote: Yup... I'm trying to clean out my PC right now and I'm taking care of my sister. I hope to buy the new Norton Security soon.

I just hope you don't get the Norton Security that gives you a message if it cans for something for a virus. That really pisses me off.

At 11/25/05 11:43 PM, Quisty wrote: I OWNED his ass too ^_^ Man that was fun, hehe.

I owned his as well.

Those things were funny, i had more fun looking at the different names vs names...

Bill gates vs Law

Haha...

~X~