Flash Animation Art Critique Please

[ExtraordinaryTerrest]

Hey peeps, I'm currently working on a flash animation and would like some opinions on the art. I've tried to improve so critiques would be well appreciated. I will post 4 screen caps as fast as Newgrounds will let me.

Screen Cap 1_

[ExtraordinaryTerrest]

Here goes another angle of his face.

[ExtraordinaryTerrest]

This is a zoomed out shot of the character facing to the front. This is a new type of character design for me, so responses to this in particular are greatly appreciated.

[ExtraordinaryTerrest]

This is a sideways shot of the character sitting down. I have been having alot of trouble with set design and perspective, so if anything looks off, please make me aware.

[ExtraordinaryTerrest]

Screw you guys...

[maficmelody]

True, the perspective is off and such.. but overall it seems to be heavily stylistic, which I'm really digging.

It is unfortunate but true that the audio track (and story) will make or break this cartoon. If you have poor audio people will accept the entire animation as poor in general. If the audio is crisp and the story is funny.. something happens where an audience can look past all the art/design flaws (to a degree) and "accept" it as "normal", so you worrying about how it looks can become irrelevant.

So I guess what I'm saying is: Art = good. Be certain story is good, and try to get good audio.
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If I had seen this post earlier I would have said something. Guess timing is everything for forum posts and bumps too..

Good luck on your toon!

[MasterMerol]

I like it!
Kinda reminds me of a David Firth cartoon.

At 3/29/11 08:00 PM, ExtraordinaryTerrest wrote:

Screw you guys...

NO YOU!

[ExtraordinaryTerrest]

Thanks for the incite guys, the cartoon should be finished in a day or two! I've got good quality audio, and I hope that people will find the toon as funny as I do!(It's a comedy)