Hellow fellow writers and readers

[NapalmDTH]

Okay Newgrounds, I know a lot of us have to much free time. I'm hoping some of you can spend that free time reviewing my novella (Its called so becuase its over 5000 words)
I plan on getting it published after high school. You guys can read it while it is still free :)?
Heres the link. I was also thinking of posting this in the arts section and seeing if anyone wanted to draw some of the characters :)

http://www.booksie.com/action_and_advent ure/short_story/vassellucci/satsujin(mur der)

Enjoy :D