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Wip test! 2011-03-15 20:04:11 Reply

Just a test to see if the spam filter is still on me, if it's not, tell me if you think that the action is clear to the viewers (the stone coming from above) cause some friends told me it's not so clear!

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/7bb2 95767997659f1618d8a9df3ea489

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Response to Wip test! 2011-03-15 20:08:28 Reply

SORRY wrong url this is the loop!

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/db66 b95c725ad9e57d53349714384ec1

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Response to Wip test! 2011-03-16 02:53:44 Reply

Fun, yet creepy.. very nice.


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Response to Wip test! 2011-03-16 04:13:43 Reply

Looks good :)
It's clear to me that the stone is coming from above. Although you told me it was before I watched it so.. I guess that's invalid. But the shadow makes it pretty obvious.
With appropriate sound, everyone should be able to tell the stone is coming from above.


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Response to Wip test! 2011-03-16 06:45:23 Reply

At 3/16/11 04:13 AM, sandwich-eater wrote: Looks good :)
It's clear to me that the stone is coming from above. Although you told me it was before I watched it so.. I guess that's invalid. But the shadow makes it pretty obvious.
With appropriate sound, everyone should be able to tell the stone is coming from above.

I agree. If you add some "falling" sound (increasing), you should have more effect. The animation is pretty cool ^^ Good game !

PS: After rewatching the loop, I see that the shadow is a little bit larger than the stone juste before it hits the head :) But that's just my opinion ^^

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Response to Wip test! 2011-03-16 14:51:03 Reply

Thanks for the replies guys, yeah sound gonna help and you are right about the shadow (gonna make bigger stone)