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TonyTheBean
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A little minecraft novel im doing 2011-03-08 00:22:31 Reply

Ive had this idea for a while so i decided to put it in play. I was kinda torn between going with tunblr or blogspot. Tell me what you think!

http://theminecraftjournal.tumblr.com/


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Response to A little minecraft novel im doing 2011-03-08 08:19:02 Reply

If you're going to describe your experiences on gameplay alone, then you're just going to be spouting sentences like 'Today I built a house,' 'Today I saw a zombie'. It's going to get very boring and redundant, especially for those who have already played the game, and don't need to know how it's like. You'd better take a moment to sit down and think of a new and interesting plot.

However, the bit at the start gives me hope. Make sure you nurture your main character, give him feelings and emotions. Give him personality. Work on your writing, too. Show, don't tell.


When I got outside, the purple fog was spreading. I covered my nose and mouth, and ran home.

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Response to A little minecraft novel im doing 2011-03-08 16:11:42 Reply

I just finished day 2.
P.S. Bump


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