Kandy's Writing Thread (nsfw)

[KandyLover]

Story 1:

Characters:

Heroes:
Karen, a Healthy and Nice girl with a very, very short fuse. She is 28 years old and works as a lawyer. She wears a black jacket, a red tie, and long black trousers.

Tommy is the weakest of the group. He's also a Short and Bratty boy. He is 19 years old and works as a lawyer. He wears an average lawyer suit.

Wendy, a Cute and Intelligent girl who is Hyperactive, so she can't show her intelligence off that much. She works as a lawyer and wears an average lawyer suit in blue. Her hair is brown and wrapped up in a pigtail.

Villains:

Mary, an Ugly Mean girl with no fuse, it's already burnt away. Works as a prosecutor.

[TheFarseer]

So.....what exactly is this?

[KandyLover]

At 2/22/11 12:57 AM, TheFarseer wrote: So.....what exactly is this?

I'm writing a story with those characters, and I'll be putting it up.

[Coop]

Generally, it's best to wait until you've got something to show us, rather than giving us your notes. We've got no synopsis here or even a few rough drafts of the writing, just brief character notes and it leaves nothing out there to grab the reader.

I just think you've jumped the gun a little.

[Deathcon7]

I, for one, am excited to read about a 19 year old with the competency to pass a bar exam. I'm thinking Doogie Houser with suits and less blood. Scratch that, more blood!