The Enchanted Cave 2
Delve into a strange cave with a seemingly endless supply of treasure, strategically choos
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COMPLETE edition of the interactive "choose next panel" comic
4.09 / 5.00 12,195 ViewsMy art thread! I've got three to post now but I'll be working on more.
At 2/16/11 10:00 AM, Eeon wrote: And my self portrait
The skin colour doesn't stand up well against the white background, maybe should've used a coloured background.
I like your simle yet cartoony style. I think that the first one could hve done with a simple background and also as Jonny pointed out the skin tone on the third one doesn't stand out to good. Other then that they are great pieces and I look forward to seeing more of them :).
At 2/16/11 10:00 AM, Eeon wrote: And my self portrait
the background is stopping the flow of the image, so would be worth changing the direction of the way it changes [if that made any sense]
At 2/16/11 11:11 AM, Decky wrote: I like your simle yet cartoony style. I think that the first one could hve done with a simple background and also as Jonny pointed out the skin tone on the third one doesn't stand out to good. Other then that they are great pieces and I look forward to seeing more of them :).
Thanks, I'll be working on my fourth piece so I can get scouted, and I'll keep in mind that skin tone on white. I'm always terrible at picking skin colours.
At 2/16/11 12:34 PM, threadwood wrote: the first one is the best, good job. i would get rid of the black line in the second one. it's a nice line, but it shouldn't be there, or it shouldn't be black.
Thanks for the critique. The second one was actually the first one I've drawn of this batch and I agree, the line is out of place upon some reflection.
At 2/17/11 12:30 AM, Eeon wrote: Quite proud of this one.
Lol beatles.
At 2/17/11 02:20 AM, maficmelody wrote: Love the style, would like to see some animation from you.
Thanks. I've tried flash and I'm really shit at it.
At 2/16/11 09:58 AM, Eeon wrote: My art thread! I've got three to post now but I'll be working on more.
i really really like this first one