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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-09 02:35:37 Reply

At 5/8/11 05:01 PM, toontown1 wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/d093 1d41d7aedac47970d2a343dd1950 <-- FLA FILE

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/2bbd 10a3f0ebb623e47b3754b0e2d1d3 <-- SWF

Here you go :3

That part is quite good. Though, the animation can be smoother. If you can go over the top of those frames and keep the lines relatively the same, it will look much better. Also, the spring is a bit delayed, if you could make it go up a bit faster, it will look much better.

Please do not put your name their as I will create one better and neater, with a link to your profile.

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I am still a little busy with assignments, so I will get straight to animating whenever I find the time.


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-09 12:57:15 Reply

At 5/8/11 05:01 PM, toontown1 wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/d093 1d41d7aedac47970d2a343dd1950 <-- FLA FILE

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/2bbd 10a3f0ebb623e47b3754b0e2d1d3 <-- SWF

Here you go :3

Very good, Very good indeed. But just a suggestion you should smoothen the drawingings, But still very good animation.

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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-09 13:01:01 Reply

That part is quite good. Though, the animation can be smoother. If you can go over the top of those frames and keep the lines relatively the same

Hey um i'm not quite sure what you mean by keeping the lines relatively the same. If you could maybe explain how that can be done, i'll do it. I did get rid of the name and made the spring come up faster, but i'll put up an updated file and swf when i've got what you wanted done.


tfw no face

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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-09 19:11:54 Reply

At 5/9/11 01:01 PM, toontown1 wrote:
That part is quite good. Though, the animation can be smoother. If you can go over the top of those frames and keep the lines relatively the same

What I mean is the lines of the character on the right start off big (The drawing lines) then go really small. If you could keep them about medium thickness (in between) it will look a lot better.

You can either do that, or smoothen the lines. Best of luck.


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-09 22:20:38 Reply

I'm trying to make it better, but with every change, i feel as if i'm ruining it no matter what changes i make to it. Do you think you could just take the .fla file i already put up? I just feel thats as good as i can get it without me making it worse. I hope you understand.


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-09 23:11:33 Reply

At 5/9/11 10:20 PM, toontown1 wrote: I'm trying to make it better, but with every change, i feel as if i'm ruining it no matter what changes i make to it. Do you think you could just take the .fla file i already put up? I just feel thats as good as i can get it without me making it worse. I hope you understand.

If so, save what you already have. Then, go save as onto wherever you save your .fla's and save as "60frametest", then edit that one and then show us. If that fails, you can go back to the original .fla and we can keep that.


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-10 00:00:04 Reply

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/304d 9f6dd0afb0aa16f2fc2736e011f2 <-- Updated .fla

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/453f a8bbbd44dd9deffc959dc3779db1 <-- Updated SWF

There's not a lot of noticeable changes i know, but the name has been taken out and the spring moves faster with the character being flung. I don't feel comfortable making changes to the art because I don't think i can make look better than it is. Hope you enjoy my work though. Perhaps i can make another piece for the collab. :)


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-10 08:53:15 Reply

Here is an old animation i did a year ago.

60 frame blowmind swf

60 frame Blowmind Fla


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-10 09:02:47 Reply

The christmas angel soaring to heaven!

60 frame Angel swf

60 frame Angel Fla


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-12 14:09:26 Reply

Hey Steak you said the deadline is on the 10th But, its the 12th now,has everyone done there part yet?

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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-12 20:22:27 Reply

At 5/12/11 02:09 PM, Crimzun1 wrote: Hey Steak you said the deadline is on the 10th But, its the 12th now,has everyone done there part yet?

No, our target is 50 quality, I think we have 8.

Deadline now is June 12th.

@Zeebrification: It is okay, so I think it should go into the second stream of animations (medium quality).


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-12 20:58:26 Reply

Hey steak could you post links to the top 8 sothat we have an idea of what quality you are looking for.
Much appreciated
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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-12 22:48:21 Reply

Would it be okay if I made more? If so, are we still sticking with the theme or just doing random ones.


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-13 04:12:23 Reply

At 5/12/11 08:58 PM, zeebrafication wrote: Hey steak could you post links to the top 8 sothat we have an idea of what quality you are looking for.
Much appreciated
zeebra

Here are a few:

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/f5bd 84f00f64107ed78a0f018fc30db3

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/ac3b a1022998669c657535bcd409dc89 (Unsure yet)

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/e3f0 0715178e73afd2f2dc15b3e13b6d

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/6232 34d4ed306ee9bc57270f360c184f

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/1a97 0215ed0058db72f99b2d9baaeb28 (Still a Work in Progress (WIP)

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/2594 17d5baffa0a3820296028518f9b9 (Probably the highest quality part yet).

@Mckellard: Yes, you can create more. That would be great.


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-13 04:16:51 Reply

At 5/12/11 10:48 PM, Mckellard wrote: Would it be okay if I made more? If so, are we still sticking with the theme or just doing random ones.

Oh, and it is any theme. Random.


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-13 14:13:22 Reply

My apologies for my tardiness but I haven't had an opportunity to go online for a while.
But I can see that the collab is still going and this comforts me.

Just letting you guys know I haven't forgotten about yous peoples. :3

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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-13 15:56:35 Reply

At 5/13/11 04:12 AM, SteakandKidneyPie wrote:
At 5/12/11 08:58 PM, zeebrafication wrote: Hey steak could you post links to the top 8 sothat we have an idea of what quality you are looking for.
Much appreciated
zeebra
Here are a few:

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/1a97 0215ed0058db72f99b2d9baaeb28 (Still a Work in Progress (WIP)

Hi SteakandKidneyPie,

Sorry for keeping you waiting, I was busy on other things and forgot about this.

I have done some modifications accordingly. Please check it out:

Click HERE

By the way, is it OK if I don't provide the .fla file?

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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-13 17:03:09 Reply

Can I participate in this or is it for cool peeps only?


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-13 18:19:10 Reply

At 5/13/11 05:03 PM, LazyModeComics wrote: Can I participate in this or is it for cool peeps only?

Yes you can. How many parts would you like to create?

@Quasimodo: That looks a lot better. I will now put that in the higher stream of quality. Good work.

@Damien: That is good, I hope you stay and complete a few parts.

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@Everyone: So you do not think I am just taking advantage of your parts, I will be doing a couple myself once I find time. Assignments are really a pain (especially when you aren't motivated).

Has anyone still got ideas for contests?


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-13 20:38:02 Reply

At 5/13/11 06:19 PM, SteakandKidneyPie wrote:
Has anyone still got ideas for contests?

no, and what about the art and games?


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-13 21:31:06 Reply

I will try to make a high quility short i just need time to think... and ima put a shadow in on my other part like you recommended.
@quasi I love your part but maybe you can do just one punch and make the glove darker like in the middle of glove make it look like you hit a screen make it shatter? just throwing ideas :P you dont have to :P


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-13 22:34:02 Reply

WIP

Roller coaster


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-14 00:19:29 Reply

At 5/13/11 10:34 PM, WaterHorse wrote: WIP

Roller coaster

Not bad as of now. Hopefully you can finish it. Also, I have a few artists creating some art, a 60 minute challenge. I also have a couple of games coming from a programmer.

@Lazyass: Yes, you will complete the next part, haha, do whatever. And thanks for adding that shadow.

@Quasimodo: Lazy has a good taste of editing, so please do what he said two posts up, thanks mate. Your part looks really good, although with this added it will look even greater.

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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-14 00:21:19 Reply

I actually just recently feel like trying to help more then i usually do then again im lazy and still havent added that shadow i have all of tomorrow after 6 lol so dont worry :P i will add it and np man


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-14 16:15:48 Reply

At 5/12/11 08:22 PM, SteakandKidneyPie wrote:
Deadline now is June 12th.

That should give me some more time to do one or two more parts. :)

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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-14 18:48:17 Reply

At 5/14/11 04:15 PM, Marsume wrote:
At 5/12/11 08:22 PM, SteakandKidneyPie wrote:
Deadline now is June 12th.
That should give me some more time to do one or two more parts. :)

Great then. Best of luck.


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-14 18:49:15 Reply

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/6232 34d4ed306ee9bc57270f360c184f

here you go and like i said if i tihnk of something i will try to make it great


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-14 21:21:57 Reply

At 5/14/11 06:49 PM, LazyAss23 wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/6232 34d4ed306ee9bc57270f360c184f

here you go and like i said if i tihnk of something i will try to make it great

That looks a lot better. Good work.


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-14 22:00:26 Reply

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/cc51 316b0b025cd05630f45ad53a4544
this is still a WIP but anyone have ideas on what i should do or change?


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Response to 60 Frame Collab 4 2011-05-14 22:10:40 Reply

At 5/14/11 10:00 PM, Mckellard wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/cc51 316b0b025cd05630f45ad53a4544
this is still a WIP but anyone have ideas on what i should do or change?

maybe make the bag less blurry


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