Here it goes.
I wake up in a... *sniff* sniff*... A dumpster, not knowing what just happened, or how long I've been here. I do still remember my name, and everything else like places and things, but the rest of my memory is blank. I'm starting to think I was here since I was a baby, but I already have my cloths on (a black sweater, with jeans., and sneakers). I open the dumpster just a little bit, just to peak out, and I notice I'm in an alley, of New York City. But something's wrong here.. Where are the people? I'm probably not in a highly populated area, so I get out, and start walking. When I get to the street, the first thing I notice is the weather. It's cloudy.. Very cloudy, in fact, dark gray. But the thing that bothered me the most is the population.. Empty. No cars, no people.. Just me.
I can continue, but I'm not sure if this is even good enough.
What am I missing?
I need you guy's opinion on it. Feel free to say it sucks. My main question is:
A good beginning to a story, or what?